I can’t really test the game now, but took a look at the instructions. At some point you mention:

For windows users it’s simple, extract the contents of the zip folder to a location on your computer (your choice). Then enter the folder named windows, if you have a 64-bit PC then use x86_64, if you have a 32 bit OS use x86.

I haven’t used the latest windows versions, but when you mention the “folder named windows” are you referring to the system folder? If that’s the case I strongly advice to remove that text. Asking people to put files inside a system folder is extremely dangerous.

If your game needs to simply be extracted, and then simply run the executable file inside, then you can simply say “Extract the contents of the zip and run the executable inside”. The user can take care of the details.

Linux and Mac users just extract the files from the zip then install like any other software. I don’t know much about your systems, but their are many more people on the internet available to help a lot of them far more intelligent than I am. I hope this helps.

Fair enough if you are not familiar with Linux and Mac. Maybe you can change the copy to something like “I’ve exported the Linux and Mac versions with Unity, but I haven’t tested them”, or something to that degree. This makes it clear that it should work, but it’s up to the user to do the rest.

Sorry if my tone sounds a little sharp, but modifying files inside system folders is a big no on windows, especially for non-tech savvy users.

Congratulations on the progress so far, looking forward to see how the game evolves :)

I played the first and second level. The controls were quite a hurdle. The fact that they don't change based on your camera position is a big problem. It's very easy to get disoriented and not know which button will move you in which direction. 

I didn't beat the first level because I found the invisible maze to be too frustrating. I didn't notice anything that would indicate an entrance to the maze, and only landed on ground briefly once or twice. Generally I'd fall off attempting to enter it, and I didn't really find that aspect fun in it's current state. I think if there was some sort of clue to at least get me started it would help. For example, I thought that the nearest cube would have a path leading straight to it to get me started. However, I fell every time I tried to go to it, and didn't know what else to do. I also tried this more times than I would have if I had a handle on the controls.

Level 2 was better, and I was able to complete it. However, the floor in it's current state is kind of a problem. The flat bright blue color makes it very hard to see changes in the elevation, so at first it wasn't clear which direction to go, as I guess the ramp blended in with the starting platform. It would also be nice if there was a shadow or something to make it seem like the ball was sitting on the floor. 

But level 2 is where I started to see some potential for this as maybe a speed game of some sort. The big ramps on that level look like you could build up a lot of speed on them, though it feels like there's some kind of cap right now (or maybe the plain environment makes it hard to tell how fast I'm going?).  Still, I like the idea of building momentum on them. The controls would definitely need to be more intuitive before that would work though. And maybe instead of the brake being an instant stop, and can slow you that way you can turn easier without losing all momentum. I think giving players tools to perfect a quick path through the levels is where most of the potential fun in this game lies. 

So the takeaway: I don't think this game can be fun with its current controls. Address this before you do anything else. If you're going to edit visuals, start with the floor just because it's the hardest thing on the eyes and the only one that I think actually affects game play right now. I think there's fun to be had in coming up with fast routes through the levels, and it may be wise to design with that in mind. 

Good luck!

The game definitely looks a lot better now, so that's pretty awesome. I still can't get over the controls though. It's not something you can explain away imo. Controls aren't really where you want the difficulty of a game to come from. If you consider some of the best "difficult" games - from Super Meat Boy to Dark Souls - they almost all have really good controls. The level design and puzzle design are where the difficulty should come from. I feel like the hint for the controls is a band-aid for a core gameplay issue that you would be better off just solving. Maybe have it be as simple as clicking moving Bobby in the direction you're looking or something. I think there are a lot of ways you can approach it, but this control scheme is fundamentally flawed.

It might suck to have to fix something big like that, but that's precisely why it was a smart move to get feedback on your game like this.