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A jam submission

RAZAMView game page

Collect all memories and find out the story of "world with no light"
Submitted by SweetHour (@OurSweetHour) — 21 hours, 5 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Innovation#2623.5003.500
Audio#3183.3333.333
Theme#3473.6673.667
Graphics#3543.6253.625
Overall#4123.3893.389
Game Design#6213.1673.167
Fun#7203.0423.042

Ranked from 24 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

In what way does your game fit the theme?
This is a game about how those who did not accept and rejected others went mad in the dark. And those who accept others as they are live in unity and peace.
P.S. RAZAM means Together.

Did you write all the code yourself and made all the assets from scratch?
All and everything is made by myself except water asset from asset store and free low poly man model: https://sketchfab.com/3d-models/proportional-low-poly-man-free-download-0bfd0e2b49a348a4b64b20cc8196e3b3

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Submitted(+1)

Needs a bit of polish, but otherwise real fun and dark! Great entry.

Developer

Hey, thanks for feedback! Many problems are already fixed and I will upload fixed version as soon as Jam is done. gonna check your game as soon as I can!

Submitted(+1)

Loved the story! Here's my one complaint. I know this is this is part of the game but I couldn't see where I was going.

Developer

thanks for feedback and playing! yeah, it's a but too dark, I already fixed it and made it twice more Bright already, I will upload the fixed version as soon as Jam is done! Gonna check your game ASAP!

Submitted(+1)

Really fun game with a great atmosphere, story was a little confusing to wrap my head around but i really liked the concept of this, the visuals in this too are really well done.

Developer

Thanks for playing and review! Gonna check your game as soon as possible!

Submitted(+1)

Fun game game. I love the atmosphere even though I didn't fully understand the story. Really good concept. Keep up the good work!

Developer

Grateful for feedback! gonna check your game as soon as possible!

Submitted(+1)

I was a little confused about the story in this game, but I liked the atmosphere and the sound effects. 

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Submitted(+1)

Hey, nice work! Those dark people made me think of the damned souls in Dante's Inferno ^^

Feel free to rate mine:

https://gamesofarcadia.itch.io/the-elementals

Developer(+1)

Thanks! glad you liked it! already rated yours!

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Submitted(+1)

Really atmospheric, sound and visual complement each other very well. I was a little bit confused when it was teleporting me to the start, I guess I kept hitting the ceiling? But I made it, its fun :)

Developer

Thank you! Happy to hear that you liked the visuals and atmosphere! and yes, when you hit the ceiling or fly too high it returns you back, i wanted to add some text like "dont be afraid of darkness, it will keep you there" but there was no time! But now majority  of technical problems(like camera and so on) are already fixed and will be published after game jam, since i cant upload fixed version until jam is done). Thank you for your opinion one more time!

Submitted(+1)

I love the story! 

Developer

Glad you liked it! it simple and short, but i decided that its better to have complete short story instead of incomplete one!

Submitted(+1)

Well done!

Really a nice looking game.

Camera can be a little bit confusing sometimes, but it is not really a big problem.

The story and music feels good.

Developer

Thank you! Majority  of technical problems(with camera and so on) are already fixed and will be published after game jam, since i cant upload fixed version until jam is done)

Submitted

The story was great! the only issue I have with it is that flying was a bit overpowered and I only realised that there were platforms when I got to number 5.

Developer

Grateful for review, thanks! Majority  of technical problems are already fixed and will be published after game jam, since i cant upload fixed version until jam is done)

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Submitted(+1)

The story was really captivating! Awesome game!

And pls do rate mine :)

Developer

Thanks, and rated)

Submitted(+1)

LOVED THE GAMEPLAY. No joke the BEST story game ive played this jam!Yhe graphics rely impressed me. I left a great rating. would appreciate if u gave me a good rating too :) kepp up the great work!

Developer(+1)

Really appreciate it, thanks! 

Submitted(+1)

Wow. This game has amazing graphics! Although, I feel like there is too much story, and no gameplay. the jump was a little confusing, and having no lights made it hard to see. Music and Audio definitely set the theme of this game. Great Job!

Developer

Thanks for the opinion! Majority  of technical problems are already fixed and will be published after game jam, since i cant upload fixed version until jam is done)

Submitted (2 edits) (+1)

Nice, feels a lot like an art exhibition! The story is short and simple, yet complete, which is nice. A few problems/suggestions (which you might already be aware of, but I’ll include them just in case):

  • The downloaded archive only contains a windows executable, better not mark it as suitable for linux & mac
  • Camera seems to jitter while you’re flying, as if you we doing some fixed increments to the vertical coordinate
  • Flying mode only gets enabled after holding [Space] for about a second, which feels a little bit awkward, maybe just start flying immediately?
  • Shadows look blocky, as if in basic shadow mapping or PCF. Maybe increase shadow map resolution, or use cascaded shadow maps / variance shadow maps?
  • The “Creator” button looks like it doesn’t do anything; only after closing the game did I realize that it opens a browser page

Anyways, good job!

Developer (1 edit) (+1)

Спасибо за советы и замечания! Особенно про полёт. тени и поддержку Linux&Mac. Про "дергающуюся камеру" и кнопку "Creator"  я знаю, но на исправление немного не хватает времени, ну и опыта в первую очередь. Про art exhibition приятно слышать, спасибо!

Submitted(+1)

Wow, this is a rather unusual game. Good story, short but complete, wrapped up in a game, I don't often see games like this

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