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A jam submission

ONE WAY TRAINView game page

Puzzle/Action game with narration
Submitted by John Papello — 13 hours, 4 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Audio#813.7033.703
Graphics#1004.0814.081
Overall#1633.5633.563
Innovation#2123.4863.486
Fun#2223.5143.514
Game Design#2983.4593.459
Theme#5733.1353.135

Ranked from 37 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

In what way does your game fit the theme?
It's an action game with chaotic puzzles and story.

Did you write all the code yourself and made all the assets from scratch?
Yes

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Developer (1 edit)

Hello everyone! 

I just released a new version of my game! I would love to hear from all of you what you think about it :)

Submitted(+1)

cool game! Would love it to have some sort of checkpoint system so I don't have to start over from the beginning each time. Also - while the voice acting is cool, it's a little hard to understand, so some captions would be nice too. Cool puzzles though and nice game!

Developer

Thank you for playing my game and detailed feedback!

It was my first time doing the voice over so it wasn't perfect. I'm currently working on improved version of my game. Thank You for your comment :)

Developer(+1)

Attention! To avoid frustration caused by unskippable intro please watch the video below:

(Crouch while jumping)

Submitted(+1)

I feel so proud to have found this skip. Still a great game!

Developer (1 edit) (+1)

Your discovery helped many people beat my game. Thank you!

Submitted(+1)

Love the voice acting! I must admit, I didn't play it as many times as I would have liked to, especially with the unskippable intro. Still, nice game! I read below that you're gonna update the game, please ping me when you do! 
If you've got time, can you try and rate our game as well? Thank you :D

Developer(+1)

Thanks for playing my game!

I will remember to inform you when there is a new version. Also, yes, I play games of all the people who took the time to check my game. Thank you for your comment :)

Developer(+1)

Hello. I just updated my game "ONE WAY TRAIN". You asked me to let you know when that happens, so here I am. I would love to know what you think about the improved version :)

(+1)

Great concept, but needs two things. First, a way of skipping the intro. I tried the suggested method of clipping through the wall, but it didn't work on my machine. Second, checkpoints. Because the precision in the dance-floor room has to be pinpoint accurate (I was losing even when very clearly standing on the right tile, which I assume is a collider problem), it needs an easier way of trying over.

Developer

Thanks for playing and feedback!

I have a list of things to fix. After the jam is over, I will release a new version. The bug shown in the video works, but you have to crouch while doing it. I didn't placed the box collider above the door so thats why it's possible. Second puzzle is definitevely too difficult. I will fix that.

(+1)

Glad to hear you're on top of it! I'll be sure to revisit this once the jam is over then :)

Developer

Hello. I just updated my game "ONE WAY TRAIN". I would love to know what you think about the improved version :)

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Wow, I really like your game, the graphics are solid, I like the voice acting and the game has the right amount of challenge. I feel like it would profit from some checkpoints, although i can see that it may would be too easy with checkpoints. Good job  :)

Developer

Thanks for playing my game!

I'm still not sure if I should add checkpoints or not. Thanks for the feedback :)

Submitted(+1)

Really nice game!

Hit boxes for explosions could be a little bit smaller to allow for a small error margin, such as the second room.

I loved the idea and the voiceover. Good job overall <3

Developer

Thank you for playing my game and feedback!

I was thinking about reducing the size of the hitboxes. It seems like the best way to fix the difficulty problem. Thank for kind words :)

Submitted

Great! Really fun and every detail is really nice. Keep it up!

Developer

Thank you for playing my game!

Submitted(+1)

Nicely done. The voiceover is a nice touch. The only thing i would say someone has already mentioned. Not having to completely restart on every challenge would have been nice but overall well done!

Developer

Thanks for playing and feedback!

I will make the puzzles easier and add checkpoint at the bomb room once the jam is over.

Submitted(+1)

We have many things to fix afterwards! But please check us out too.

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-6/rate/1177113

Submitted(+1)

I think this is a pretty cool game. I really like the colors of the train and I think the concept is interesting. I did have some trouble listening to the instructions though, but other than that I think the game is really good. Great work!

Developer

Thank you for playing my game and such kind words!

It was my first time doing a voice over, so it wasn't the best.

Submitted(+1)

Cool game..

Adding some level progress save will makes it more fun to play

Developer(+1)

Thank you for playing my game and feedback!

I will try to make this game better after rating period is over.

Submitted

👍

Submitted

- I like the voice acting. 
- I like that the reticle reacts when you can interact with something. 
- I tried the second puzzle a few times but there wasn't a way to skip the beginning or restart from the last puzzle so I stopped after a few tries.

Other then that it seems like a cool game. Congrats on completing.

Developer

Thank you for playing my game and such kind words!

I have posted a comment that is always at the top that shows a bug that allows you to skip the intro. Wish there was a way to pin it.

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