I think animating text would have made this a bit easier to get through.
There were a few small spots with minor grammar issues, but overall this was interesting! Keep up the great work!
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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Originality | #885 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Overall | #1082 | 3.267 | 3.267 |
Adherence to the Theme | #1126 | 3.400 | 3.400 |
Design | #1161 | 2.900 | 2.900 |
Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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It's just fair that I rate your game too after you rated mine, but your game was really confusing to me. I don't like text based games and I have no idea why the thing started over again. Maybe I missed something.
Therefore, I will not rate your game, because I don't know how. I hope this is ok for you.
Oh yeah, I was just playing your game. No worries, text based games can be a bit of a niche.
Just yesterday a streamer was playing my game and just closed the window out of nothing. It was quite funny his reaction ;D
Thing is I don't want to spoil much, but it isn't actually 'restarting'. I'm just glad you tried!
Very compelling, though I do find it surprising that such an amazing visual artist chose to make a text-based game. Speaking of your art, if you might be interested in collaborating on a project I have in mind, please email me at my gmail address, mathesonkendra.
Dang the feels were real with this one! Very good writing! Have you done any writing for other games or released any others yourself? I'd love to check them out!
I realy liked the emotion this game gives. You are a great writer : )
The emotion is certainly there, I wouldn't have kept going through if I wasn't intrigued.
Where would you like to take this in the future?
Nice entry, the emotion was there, not sure wich choice was right but i guess thats the point and it's a neat take on the "Only one" theme good job man :)
I never thought that a text based game would catch my attention like this, such an intense feeling that you were able to pass through the few lines of text.
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