Ok, wow, this is really cool. Visually you have something here. I was greatly amused by interacting with the parchment and the little quips of dialogue, and how you can insert and change lines. That was neat. From a player point of view, I think the font choice while aesthetically pleasing to the game, is hard to read. Sometimes during story elements the text appears really small in the bottom left of the screen while at the same time big action things are happening with more text over there on the other side -- it can be dizzying for the eye.

Very unique concept, great art, funny gameplay. Awesome work all around!

Nice Art ! Nice concept aswell.

Nice art ! Nice concept aswell, fun take on the theme ^^

I want to know, could you have actually gotten them to get married??? I apparently failed at it.

beautiful game! I love the concept and the alterations are very fun!

The story is very amusing and the artworks are really great.

Very charming and funny story! Really liked that the choices you make along the way effect the ending, would love to see more of the outcomes at the end as it does go by quickly. Text size was a little small and when made fullscreen the text would be pushed down to the bottom of the scroll. Couldn't get the music to work unfortunately, so couldn't experience that :(  But the characters were lovely, art was great and story was a good laugh + well sequenced!

Really nice art work! I had some problems seeing the text, but great work regardless.

The game feels nice to control and some of the dialogue is pretty funny! I felt a little lost though, I'm not sure if what I write on the letters changes anything

ummm, I can't say anything about this game but it definitely needs more works to do to become an enjoyable game. Keep it up!

I'm not exactly sure what I accomplished here, but I got to the ending, got to draw little pictures with a nice quill and talk about digestive issues with the funny plant king, so I'd say I had a good time!