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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Theme Adherence | #1 | 4.375 | 4.375 |
| Art & Sound | #6 | 3.125 | 3.125 |
| Overall | #8 | 3.094 | 3.094 |
| Polish | #10 | 2.500 | 2.500 |
| Game Design & Mechanics | #13 | 2.375 | 2.375 |
Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Although I am not a fan of AI in creative regards, I thought your game looked quite nice. The story was good and I enjoyed my playthrough, so great work!
Good!!
After finishing the story, it felt like I could not shake something off that was clinging on to me. The art also helped really feel what the main character was feeling and seeing. The arrow keys to select the thought were a little confusing but a good idea because it makes you feel more of what is the right choice, sometimes i would press the wrong key and I'm like "oh no!, I am possessed!"
Great adherence to the theme, and really good job for your first visual novel! The art is really nice in places, and for a week it's all a damn good effort. I think the arrow symbols for the choice selection could have been a bit clearer and the font you chose for the main text isn't the very easiest to read, so a few small changes might improve the accessibility a good bit.
Thank you very much! I tried to do my best in just one week. This is my first time creating a visual novel, and there’s still a lot to improve to make it more interesting.
Wow that was an intense story. I definitely felt theme of Haunted Memories. I think the writing was quite good. You definitely captured what I think a evil demon would be like and man does that evil demon have it out for this guy.
I really liked how the dialogue boxes were implemented. I also liked how the animations and dialogues were coordinated. I think that was really well done.
Thank you. Yes, there were many things I wanted to change and others that were missing. I’m happy with the result, considering I did it in a week and not full-time—really just five mornings, as weekends and evenings are impossible for me.
It keeps getting freezed at the where it says "do you really remember nothing". But anyways it looks great, it shows the care put in the art.
Try pressing the right arrow keys and then space. I was stuck there for a bit until I realized this.
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I figured some bug might come up, even with all the tests I ran.
I thought this was an interesting story. It's heart wrenching feeling if the one you trust with your heart betrays you... Even more gut wrenching to realize you—
Thank you!!