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A jam submission

HoloreTRY! - Detective's day offView game page

Submitted by Lunexi (@_Lunexi) — 9 hours, 35 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme#54.2604.316
Innovation#223.0133.053
Gameplay#232.9613.000
Overall#263.0763.116
References#352.5982.632
Ambience#362.5462.579

Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Very good use of the theme! My main gripe is I feel like there's a lot of missed opportunities to have additional references to other holomembers, since the NPCs are mostly just rando civilians

Submitted(+1)

Pretty solid gameplay, love how every single action you do is captured into the dialogue with kronii. Cute sprite work as well. Some thoughts:
- This is just a nitpick, but try to keep pixel resolutions consistent throughout the screen. Its a little jarring to see some items having higher pixel density to the rest of the environment/characters (This will probably mean some items will just be a 6 pixel blob, but since each items is not that difficult to reach, I dont think it is that important for players to instantly recognize from the screen what each item is)
- The lack of audio is a bit of a wasted opportunity for higher score on ambience. Try to just find some free royalty music that kinda match the vibe of your game and just slap it in, it'll just take about 30 mins.

Submitted(+1)

Seems like a really nice game and kinda reminds me of this one Personality Game many Holo Members streamed a while ago (which i sadly forgot the name of). Great Concept! Looking forward if you ever decide to continue it!

Jam Judge(+1)

Cute pixel art and interesting implementation of the jam theme.

I did a couple of runs making different choices in each and then checked Kronii's feedback.

I wonder if there's an optimal ending for the game.

Would be nice if there were more holo references or characters in the game. :)

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the feedback!

For now there isn't an optimal ending since I plan to improve my writing first and add more zones, which would also include more members for specific zone.

Also plan to add minigames themed after most members as well.