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A mother's love's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Community Spirit | #84 | 3.125 | 3.125 |
| Originality | #95 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Use Of Theme | #104 | 2.625 | 2.625 |
| Overall | #107 | 2.594 | 2.594 |
| Fun | #130 | 1.625 | 1.625 |
Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Team or Solo
Solo
Credit:
Youtube tutorials!
Did you follow the theme?
Yes
Did you (you or your team) do the graphisms yourself?
Yes
Did you (you or your team) do the musics and sounds yourself?
No music.
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nice poems to bad there wasn't more but it was short and to the point but both endings he was stuck writing and writing some more yay.
Thank you for posting your thoughts!
Games like this once you get the core mechanic down (text and response); the content can be quite extensible. Good job with getting started here.
Yes, and thanks a lot!A longer prose piece would be nice. I do think that the idea of a game that has you walk through a choose-your-own adventure of poetry is compelling. Because this is a game, you have more at your disposal than just the text that poetry would afford you. Possibly consider collaborating with a visual artist and a musical artist to produce your next game in this style, and you can together express the emotions of the prose in an even more captivating way.
You're right, thank you so much for taking the time to provide your feedback!
This could make a good text adventure game but there does need a bit more. I would also maybe have the game go to a menu or something when you are finished, or a credits possibly?
Right, thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!
Sorry, this really needs more. One poem with two endings in this form is not quite a game, but I'd love to see you expand on this to a full choose-your-own-adventure.
Got it, thanks for dropping a coment!