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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Aesthetics | #29 | 3.714 | 3.714 |
| Audio | #34 | 3.143 | 3.143 |
| Magical Girl Concept | #39 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Engagement/Fun | #40 | 2.714 | 2.714 |
| Theme Interpretation | #41 | 2.714 | 2.714 |
| Originality/Creativity | #42 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #42 | 2.918 | 2.918 |
| Gameplay Polish | #50 | 2.143 | 2.143 |
Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the Magical Girl genre?
This is a game about a girl who runs a laundromat in a run down world, using her magical powers to help her fellow survivors.
Which theme(s) do you pick?
Recollect Lines
How does your game fit those theme(s)?
This game is about a magical girl seamstress going out and recollecting lines of yarn, as well as recollecting lines of the past destroyed world.
Were the assets for your game made during the jam? Elaborate as you see fit.
Yes.
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This is a really solid entry!
The artwork is absolutely fantastic. I love the aesthetic and the designs, especially Hali's. The music is also very nice, especially the title screen's.
I did find the hitboxes confusing - several times, I could see Hali's head go into a space which I was sure should have blocked her movement.
Overall, excellent entry, and I'd love to see this developed further. Good work!
Your art stands out the most.
The level design is also decent.
The game breaks if I die and replay the game in the web build.
It's a nice game.
I really liked the character art(both in game and during the dialogue)and overall look of the game! The character animation was nice too. Another thing I really enjoyed was the music in the level, really had a great anime vibe to it!
The combat could have used a little more feedback/juice. Currently hits don't feel very satisfying, and tossing the enemies into the air with any hit makes combo-ing them difficult. I also encountered a few bugs... if I tried to play again after game over, the intro dialogue would not proceed... I had to refresh the page. Falling off the screen at the start doesn't lead to game over either. I think I reached the end of the level, but I didn't find anything there. I imagine that this was due running out of time in the jam, but maybe I missed something.
Still, I think you did a lot of great work on this! It's a great start, and I hope you keep working on it!
Well done finishing the game!
Pretty nice art and animations. There are some scaling issues on hi-DPI displays, so buttons are misplaced (finding "START" on the start screen was a difficult quest itself) and the text is so small it is impossible to read.
The story is not very clear and feels a bit chaotic, it is hard to see links between a laundrette, a magical girl helping to find someone, and living plants.
Gameplay is simple and clean. Nothing happens when I beat the game, not sure if this is a bug of feature.
Hope to see more games from you!
The art for the characters is pretty great! I used to be a seamstress and I feel a lot of affinity for the main character