super cute walk sprite!

Well, the art is very good and it’s a solid start! Obviously it needs a lot of work and there are a lot of plans which is good to see!

I would take out the camera zooming in and out. Leave it all the way zoomed out - or find a happy medium. When it’s zoomed in it feels claustrophobic. You’ve got the visuals, so let players see the world around them.

With as many people working on this, it’s a shame there isn’t just a bit more content. I would have added at least a little bit of area to explore. Perhaps even at the top of the boss “chamber” a reason to use the double jump to escape into an area beyond that. I don’t think that would have been too difficult.

We hope we have a good start to something bigger too! Won’t you please try our game out, rate it and let us know where it could use some improvement or where it could go next? Thanks!

the art is really lovely and the demo shows potential... Hope to see where you can take this (or another project as you obviously have a good team) going forward as you have lots of the core mechanics in place and a great art style I know with more work this could be turned into a great game!

★ Enjoyment: 3/5

There isn't much game in this one

★ Design: 4/5

At least level design and gameplay experience are quite good.

★ Presentation: 4/5

I love the 'enemy' and the 'main character' graphic. But, they look weird on the background you chose.

★ Metroidvania: 4/5

Technically it's a Metroidvania, not much exploring tho.

I love the artwork and overall feel! Especially because I have a soft spot for hand-drawn animation, I was really excited for this. It'll be cool to see where it goes from here. As far as some feedback:

• The camera in the boss room was a little disorienting. It zoomed in way too close which made the platforming more difficult. It would've been nice if it remained zoomed out while the character was on the higher platforms.
• More mechanics for the boss would've been nice. Granted, it's the first fight so I understand giving the player time to learn the controls. But maybe as they get to the highest point, they could've shot out a projectile or something to add a little more challenge.

It was a satisfying demo regardless. Given the concept art, it looks like there's a lot planned for the future so I'm excited to see what will be added next.

it would have been better if the boss did something or if there was some indication that you are supposed to fight it and some visual indication that its taking damage as well

otherwise, it looks like a solid game concept....well done so far 👏

Mush, giant bird dude, mush! *smack*smack*smack*

I assume this is just an early pass at your boss fight and a demo of your controls. If not, then I definitely missed something.

It was obviously broken, but I actually was amused at just standing on the bird-dude's shoulder and smacking him in the face to make him fly.

It's a long way to go to a game, but the controls felt pretty good (though maybe the attack is a little slow?). I also like the look of the background and the concepts for the characters.

I beat it? I guess it's a neat concept but definitely just a concept. I jumped on the enemy's head and swung till it died and then couldn't go anywhere? I'm unsure, sorry this was all a bit confusing. I hope you all finish it! It looks promising.

I'm very confused...I don't know what the player is supposed to be, or what they're supposed to be doing, or how they're supposed to be doing it.

I love the art and design for the game, I had a lot of fun moving through the world, I totally get that you guys probably couldn't get a whole bunch of stuff done that you planned but all together It is super fun and interesting to play and I wish there was more. Sound was also spot on, only feedback would be indication that the boss was taking damage and I want more :0