Mini Jam 77: Courage

i was reading lots of adventure choice as a child . so i give you big congrats. but the little pictures illustrating the text make a big impact on the reader. your writing id wonderful, add some drawing to put the reader even more in your world and i think you gonna make a big impact on the reader.

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Olympus Odyssey

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malachy oDeveloper3 years ago(+1)

thank u so much, i will try to have many more images next time

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{DevLab}Submitted3 years ago(+1)

it 's just a subjective comment , maybe keep your style but for me , the little picture on the side put me directly in the story , and these stories were like the best moment ever. even adult , i read these books again , so it 's a good genre to work on.

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AbhishekSubmitted3 years ago

Interesting! The humor was great and I was lost at certain moments. But I think that was the intent, it got me imagining.
Great work!

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Underpaid_GoblinSubmitted3 years ago(+1)

THIS WAS SO COOL. I loved the spin on usual text-based games in that the player has no super clear goal, but is merely an observer being told a story through choices that lead them in a similar direction. I really enjoy how nothing is explained and everything has to be inferred by playing the game. The moments of humor in the game were quite enjoyable, and I resonate with the Gleam on a spiritual level lol. Great game and I hope to see more by you in the future.

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Spacewalker

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EzilSubmitted3 years ago

Text games rarely appear on the jam, but I like what you got. The story gives you enough choice and generally immerses you in the world quite well. Cool!

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Vovik

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LukasWhoSubmitted3 years ago

That was an interesting experience. I'm not sure how much of it I understood, but I quite enjoyed it nonetheless.

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Leaping Anyway

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EawellSubmitted3 years ago

Not my usual type of game, but definitely a fun read and it was clear that a lot of effort went into this.

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Alien Quest