Oh wow, that was an incredibly little story. Really well written!!

Very well written and interesting from start to finish, would've been lovely to have some music/sounds and/or visuals to acompany the great storytelling! Congratulations :)

An interesting, well-written story! Nice work!

Pros

Really well written plot! Very engaging story! You have some really good writing skills.

Great characters and amazing descriptions.

You managed to implement the main theme and the subthemes really well!

Cons

Perhaps some music would have been a great addition to the game.

Overall: great work! A really nice text based game! I was left wondering though...why does nobody order the catfish? 

Although it's a text based game, it's definitely enjoyable as the story is very well written and the characters are really interesting. Nice game!