Another strong entry - you used the timer well as a plot device to punctuate the story and provide natural scene breaks! I only wish you'd had the space to finish the countdown - I can't help but feel that I just read the first 1000 words of a 1500-word story and I didn't leave it with a sense of resolution. It's still an enjoyable story, though, and your voice is crisp and clear as ever.

I personally avoid writing combat given the limit of 1000 words, but you've handled it incredibly well.  Nice work!

The descriptions on the bridge screen were a little bit confusing, but overall a really fun and clear read. 

very nice i like it

Very well written, I enjoyed it a lot.

So well written and enjoyable!!! 5 stars here for you

Nicely written and very enjoyable, and not meaning to nitpick but if the torpedos were that close and expected to destroy the ship and the boarding team didn't teleport/transport in/out not sure they could get out and clear from the vessel anyway?

Good narrative with a very nicely written ending. 

Solid read. Diction was clear and the concept well communicated. Well done.

My God dude (or chick). If you wrote a whole book, I would buy it. It would be criminal if this submission doesn't win. 5 stars across the board. 

Great use of the 1k words. Very high quality writing, was a joy to read.

This reads like a pro wrote it, and has my vote for first prize. I want to know what happens next.