Definitely one of the more ambitious stories as far as scope and lore implications.  Cool to see someone wanting to take things to that next level.

One of the standout stories of the jam to me - strong flow, good lines, and bravely tackling one of the pivotal moments of the setting! It did wind up feeling a little hurried to me, though - my suggestion would be to cut out a lot of the middle action, leaving just enough to establish the situation and the characters, and use the space you save to really give the arrival of the God-Queen the breathing room it wants.

The ending felt a little out if nowhere, but. I really wish we had more stories like this, about the "early/main" questline of Grimdark Future and the Protectorate's exploits. Especially when they're this readable and able to grab attention so easily. 

You've crafted a gripping and tense story with strong characters and a powerful ending. The transformation of Elara into the God-Queen is a fantastic twist that shifts the entire narrative, leaving me eager to see what happens next.

Amazing! My favorite entry: poignant but exciting. It’s nice to see the people behind the birth of the Sisterhood.