Play book
Desperate and Dusty's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concept & Originality | #6 | 4.222 | 4.222 |
| Flow & Clarity | #8 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Adherence to the Theme | #10 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Overall | #10 | 4.074 | 4.074 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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May be a bit harsh but i feel like i've read this sort of story before.
I enjoy stories like this one that really fill out the OPR lore, great characters with some great interactions between them, thanks for the cool story.
Great world building.
I enjoyed this story very much, especially Moonbiters name and doglike actions
I really like this story. The growing trust between the two leaders and the clever potential solution to fighting the swarm was very cool. I don't think showing the final confrontation even mattered... the real story is the friendships we made along the way :P
You did a great job anchoring the story in the GdF setting just with Moonbiter's equipment. Everything flowed nicely and the ending was a great cliffhanger.
Thanks. I meant to contrast them with Mir'Zam's pristine advanced equipment, but had to cut down for wordcount :P
I feel you there; the wordcount was my worst enemy this time around.
Nice world-building and good use of contrasting factions to enhance the theme.
Thanks! I had an interest in using TAO and Jackals even before the theme was revealed, and turns out Jackals are prefect for the prompt!