Play book
Role of the Navigator's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concept & Originality | #4 | 4.429 | 4.429 |
| Overall | #10 | 3.937 | 3.937 |
| Adherence to the Theme | #13 | 3.810 | 3.810 |
| Flow & Clarity | #22 | 3.571 | 3.571 |
Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Was lost at first but then it all clicked beautifully. Well done! The use of memories, rebirth, and cyclical journeys inter-meld nicely
Crisp, evocative, with a whole world of sentences I'd love to peer further into. Splendid.
wow. that was intense! was a little hard to follow, but a great story never the less.
That was quite a ride! I found it a little hard to follow at times due to the density of the language and the sheer number of ideas you were working into paragraphs near the end, but overall I liked the effect of the "memory cascade". The overall effect and impact of the piece was very powerful.
Totally agree with the clarity disparity that needed a LOT of editing, that writing deadline crept up fast and bit me!
Wow, quite stunned by this one. Great job!
Thankyou, that's very kind of you to say.
Thanks, was a lot of fun to write and glad you enjoyed it!
This was something else, really liked the ending
Hey just letting you know the pdf file is showing as "file not found" for me! I'll check back in a couple days to see if this is just an itch error
hmm, not sure what the problem is, but am looking into it as it seems to have been read by others, maybe the website was glitching? Will check the uploads and put feelers out to see if this is widespread, thanks for trying!