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The Foreman's Plans (OPR Writing Jam 8)'s itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to the Theme | #1 | 4.291 | 4.500 |
| Overall | #3 | 4.005 | 4.200 |
| Concept & Originality | #7 | 4.052 | 4.250 |
| Flow & Clarity | #19 | 3.671 | 3.850 |
Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Such a poignant ending to this story. I love a good "one line finisher."
I look forward to your future entries. This was a good one!
Uses the term “jaunty angle”.
5 stars.
I think I have had a manager or two like this one.
Great! job!
I liked this one a lot! The humor landed for me and it just felt really well-paced, neither cramped nor stretched to meet the length requirement.
Well that junior minor was just rude at the end!
Heh. That dwarf's luck just wouldn't quit. Or lack thereof.