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MockingbirdDnB - Deep Down Underwater's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Correlation to theme | #110 | 3.909 | 3.909 |
Quality | #244 | 3.606 | 3.606 |
Overall | #304 | 3.418 | 3.418 |
Impression | #325 | 3.303 | 3.303 |
Composition | #420 | 3.182 | 3.182 |
Creativity | #500 | 3.091 | 3.091 |
Ranked from 33 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Message from the artist
Hope you enjoy my underwater ambient!
Theme
Inside my world
Picture theme
How does it fit the theme?
I wanted to create a beautiful underwater image
Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://soundcloud.com/mockingbirddnb/mockingbirddnb-deep-down-underwater?si=8a150b8fd439471a927bcc34bed7dd8e&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Number of tracks1
Genre
Electronic
Ambient
Soundtrack use permission
No
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Comments
Sounds really good, would definitely fit an underwater location or an underwater themed game, but I think you should have added more variation to the melodies and chord progressions throughout the track. Also I don't know if it was intentional or not, but the notes in the "Drops 2" are sometimes really off grid. While moving notes slightly off grid can make the melody sound more human if it's too much off grid it can sound as if the melody isn't timed correctly or isn't playing in right rythm if you know what I mean. But still I liked this track, I definitely see this as something that could be in an actual indie game
Thanks for the criticism, it definitely helps me!!
Very atmospheric you indeed followed the picture theme we feel underwater. Like someone said its very muddy in the mix when you start adding pads and play some notes around the same frequency range this is what happens. I think you can also mix up the high notes you play as a melody, sometimes the rythms is not quite there and it doesn't change that match you can try creating different patterns, make it move a little bit more will help alot !
Thanks for the review and criticism, it's really helpful!!
Beautifully atmospheric! It feels so mysterious & magical while also being comforting & relaxing :3
My brain goes to random places whenever I listen to music, and with this, I feel like it would be a perfect fit for an underwater level in something like Final Fantasy Crystal Chronicles :D
Thank you very much, appreciate it!!
Nailed the underwater sound. The chords in particular sound a little muddy, but I think that at times it actually works. Having the muddy foundation of the chords with the other instruments sounding clear and cutting through everything sounded pretty cool.
Thanks, appreciate it!!
I went randomly into the submissions, started listening to yours and fellt like: "Hey, that sounds quite like underwater... how is the track named? Ahh! :D" You really did it sound like it's underwater, well done!
Thanks!
Cool tracks! Has its underwater atmosphere, I'll just say that I think maybe its a bit muddy mix but its very cool music
Thanks for the review, appreciate it!