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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Clarity | #13 | 3.304 | 3.727 |
| Unique Selling Point | #23 | 2.820 | 3.182 |
| Engagement | #28 | 2.095 | 2.364 |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #28 | 2.498 | 2.818 |
Ranked from 11 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- Use a Twitter Card instead, with an embedded video. People tend to not click links.
- I think it's a smashing idea! Like for real- when/where else would one ever have the gall to destroy glass at no consequence!!? I just wish there was a video attached, because apart from glass being hit, broken... My mind is fragile enough and I cannot picture it.
- Tweet would be great with the video Video is very good Mobilegame and mobileapps aren't great hashtags to get noticed imho Really like these types of games
- Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
- Very clear and unique premise! Suggestions: -- Recommended tweet edit posted below (as Realms Games) -- Ask someone to proofread and edit your Press Kit for you. It will make life easier for Content Creators to pick up and share.
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/GyansGames/status/1449948417623396355
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1JbQjFRDb6HdDX2R0zoRgW-OtsWAPCz5b1jgudJEqFa0/edit?usp=sharing
Linktree URL (DevLog Update)
https://linktr.ee/GyansGames
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Love the cheeky text! Agree with other comments that a trailer would really bring a lot to this pitch - and would probably be really satisfying to watch!
Thanks for your review..preparing a new video to be attached with updated pinned tweet.
It is very clear what the game is based on tweet and press kit. I agree with others that a video would help potential players understand how the game is unique and if they'd be interested. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for your review..yeah, agree..preparing a new video to be attached with updated pinned tweet.
Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
Very clear and unique premise!
Suggestions:
-- Recommended tweet edit posted below (as Realms Games)
-- Ask someone to proofread and edit your Press Kit for you. It will make life easier for Content Creators to pick up and share.
Suggested Tweet Edit:
Glass Smashing has never been so satisfying with this addictive and free mobile game!
No more scolding from your mom, no matter how many you smash!🤣🤣
Get smashing!
Apple -- https://apps.apple.com/us/app/glass-smashing/id1575711422
Android -- https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.ftpl.GyanGames_GS
#PitchYaPitch #mobileapps #mobilegame
[Include Gameplay Video uploaded directly to Twitter]
Thanks for your feedback, particularly rewording that tweet..I'll present all the updates on 1st November morning.
Press Kit and tweet are very clear. You could use a better attachment on the tweet (such as your screenshots or video) rather than just the preview to the store page.
Thanks for your feedback..preparing the new video to be attached with pinned tweet.
Can't access the press kit is it public?
My apologies for not making it public..please check again..shared with everyone.
+ Rebellious
+ Out of the box
+ Seems to be quite a hell of a time.
- I wish I could say it's crystal clear and transparent, but yeah a video would have gotten you there.
Thanks for your kind feedback..it means a lot to me..will incorporate suggested update.
Since the pitch in pitchyagame event is the tweet, the video would help the game out a lot being in the tweet, and not just a picture.
Thanks for pointing this out..yeah, agree..will update pinned tweet with video attachment.
Could use a video or gif of the gameplay to give the viewer a reason to press the store link.
Thanks for your feedback. Actually, a game play YouTube link is embedded on the page. Is the video not convincing enough?
Player might ask, what invisible thing is breaking the glasses? answer to this may be, 1) Either put animating thumbs overlay OR 2) A person playing the game. I'll make another video.
I was thinking more like an embedded video in the tweet perhaps?
Thanks for the pointer..yeah, agree..makes more sense to update pinned tweet with video attachment.
really liked it! 😁
Thanks for your feedback.