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San Zoolin's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Unique Selling Point | #1 | 4.225 | 4.385 |
| Clarity | #3 | 3.929 | 4.077 |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #9 | 3.706 | 3.846 |
| Engagement | #13 | 3.410 | 3.538 |
Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.
- Clear USP and tweet. The presskit could use some fleshing out.
- Really unique concept that was conveyed clearly
- The game looks really cute! Love the setting and the animal characters. The premise of saving the day via psychotherapy is a really Unique Selling Point. Suggestions: -- Tweet needs a Call to Action. For now this could be Play the Free Demo [Itch Link] -- Press Kit: You may want to post a version using Indie Legion's Press Kit Lite as it covers key items in an easily digestible format. More accessible images, video, etc would be really handy for bloggers and other Content Creators. -- Indie Legion Detailed Press Kit or FeePressKit is a good idea for more detailed version.
- Me-ow! Me likey way too much!! Probably because it resonated with me and my failed ambitions of becoming a therapist. And I dunno why but a cat listening to problems is unrealistic at least to me, but they're so cute here soooo... The only little nitpick I have is the Twitter link that isn't handy or nearby. Other than that, superb work~
- Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://sanzoolin.tumblr.com/post/665381696219365376/san-zoolin-press-kit
Linktree URL (DevLog Update)
https://linktr.ee/caracolinaDev
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Very well crafted pitch tweet! Cozy vibes from the game play trailer gives me a much better idea of what to expect from the game itself. Itch page is well constructed and answers whatever questions I had.
Only change I could think of was to create an actual press kit instead of just linking to the itch page. Provide images/videos directly for download in the even press want to use them.
Best of luck in the contest!
This game looks (and sounds) really great! The first sentence of the pitch makes you think "wait, what...?" but in a good way, and you just want to know more. I would add a link to the game's page in the tweet (as well as a media, your trailer preferably since it looks real nice and has great music!)
The game looks really cute! Love the setting and the animal characters.
The premise of saving the day via psychotherapy is a really Unique Selling Point.
Suggestions:
-- Tweet needs a Call to Action. For now this could be Play the Free Demo [Itch Link]
-- Press Kit: You may want to post a version using Indie Legion's Press Kit Lite as it covers key items in an easily digestible format. More accessible images, video, etc would be really handy for bloggers and other Content Creators.
-- Indie Legion Detailed Press Kit or FeePressKit is a good idea for more detailed version.
Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
Recommended tweet edit submitted here as Realms Games.
Please click "Edit This Submission" and update your Tweet Link: https://twitter.com/IndieLegion/status/1454381616663437314
thank you!
Suggested Tweet Edit: [For #PitchYaGame simply change the hashtags]
Ever analyzed the childhood of a duck?🦆
#SanZoolin is a cozy social sim set on an island full of mysteries & colorful animal locals.
Explore inner lives in psychotherapy & save your holiday from emotional disaster!
Play the Free Demo:
https://caracolina.itch.io/san-zoolin
#PitchYaPitch
This is so cute! I think your game is really creative and the text of your tweet and itch page match the feel of the game well.
My only suggestion would be that you might get someone to review your pitch if you plan on posting for pitchyagame. Just for grammar edits and that kind of thing :)
thank you! I will definitely ask someone to check my spelling 👍
Really well put together Tweet! Makes the game feel very intriguing :)
+ Cats
+ Therapists
+ Jumping music
+ This is already shaping up to be a CATTY type of game what with the intense sessions and uncooperative patients XD
- Pitch could have been smoother but it is still darn likeable. Have I said well done!?
Love it!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to play this demo on Saturday AAAAAAAAA!! (1:00PM CST haha, remind me to ping you on twitter)
ooh! I won't be home 😖 but I hope you like the prototype!
I like to direct call for your twit, also your page is simple and tell us what we need to know in short reading.. good luck =)
I like to direct call for your twit, also your page is simple and tell us what we need to know in short reading.. good luck =)
I'm a moron and didn't realise I should make an actual tweet. Here's the text that's impossible to read as a link 😖
Would you like to analyse the childhood of a duck?🦆
#SanZoolin is a cozy social sim that takes place on a latin island full of mysteries and colorful animal locals.
Explore their inner lives in #psychotherapy & save the holiday from becoming an emotional disaster!
#PitchYaGame
I think this tweet is very effective
Not me looking for the tweet:
*oh, touche*