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Realm of Divinos - Pitch Ya Pitch's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #12 | 3.467 | 3.467 |
| Engagement | #15 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
| Clarity | #16 | 3.200 | 3.200 |
| Unique Selling Point | #25 | 2.733 | 2.733 |
Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- Realm of Divinos looks beautiful! Love the visuals! General Pitch Suggestions: -- Open your pitch with game specific content over generic blurbs. We don't know anything about the story, characters, history, etc so it's difficult to get emotionally attached or engaged. -- Reference your adorable mushroom characters, hunky love interests, etc to get people's attention and interest. See Kena Bridge of Spirits for an excellent example. Press Kit Suggestions: -- Make links clickable (insert link) -- Focus on the game visuals by expanding each screenshot image to a full slide -- Wrap all of your content into a Press Kit pack (eg on Google Drive) and include a single downloadable zip file with everything
- I was already in love with the game prior to the pitch. Like how could one not! It's... groundbreaking after all. I mean I do have questions and it seems to be very early in the development, but I am already in tune with what it has to offer. Kinda like FFXIV + Tales Games~
- Excellent pitch tweet and press kit. Can't wait to try the demo when it's released
- Feedback provided as Indie Legion.
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/itspiecake/status/1452252129809342464?s=20
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1F6bSGFh6F78omokZ-VRzmXxDBA8YOAvKbFT2cSsF45g/edit?usp=sharing
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I think adding some details about what really sets this game apart from others like it would really help get people pumped about playing your game. Awesome job on the trailer!
Shall do, thank you!
Pros: beautiful landscapes in your game. The video did a good job of highlighting where your game takes place.
Cons: I didn't know this was an ARPG or platformer until reading the Press Kit. Highlight these points in the tweet and video itself. I assumed this was a visual novel with romance tracks based on the trailer but not sure anymore after reading the press kit. We also never saw monsters, so wasn't sure how those fit into the game.
Thank you for sharing!
Thank you for your feedback!! It's very helpful!
Game looks really good and pitch is clear! I would just try and add a bit more gameplay specifics (apart from "adventure" and "meet people and monsters".) What is the actual game's goal?) Also add more medias (screens and videos) to the actual Itch page.
Good tweet and descriptions in your presskit! The video does a good job of showing what environments you'll be in, and a little bit of the writing style. It would be great to see more of the other parts of gameplay too if possible? If not, you could do more slower panning/pitching shots (maybe without the main character) to get the most out of the environments.
Good ideas! Thank you so much Noisy!
A nice pitch..a little bit of polishing and it's up and running..good luck with #PitchYaGame.
Thank youuu!
Feedback provided as Indie Legion. (see below)
Suggested Tweet Edit:
Enter the Realm of Divinos!
Adventure through beautiful landscapes and encounter captivating characters and fascinating monsters on your journey to become a revered hero, or a feared villain.
Wishlist on Steam today! (Ch.1 coming soon)
https://store.steampowered.com/app/1795710/Realm_of_Divinos/
#PitchYaPitch
Oooohhhhh that’s such a good idea. Thank you!!!
Realm of Divinos looks beautiful! Love the visuals!
General Pitch Suggestions:
-- Open your pitch with game specific content over generic blurbs. We don't know anything about the story, characters, history, etc so it's difficult to get emotionally attached or engaged.
-- Reference your adorable mushroom characters, hunky love interests, etc to get people's attention and interest. See Kena Bridge of Spirits for an excellent example.
Press Kit Suggestions:
-- Make links clickable (insert link)
-- Focus on the game visuals by expanding each screenshot image to a full slide
-- Wrap all of your content into a Press Kit pack (eg on Google Drive) and include a single downloadable zip file with everything
Thank you so much Cail!!!
lovely trailer, it really gives a vibe of a fae forest of a folklore or something like that!
Thank you so much!
+ Gorgeous and remarkably calming.
+ Groundbreaking
+ Music is exactly how I imagine a FFXIV title would sound.
- Longer clip and more gameplay~ What a TEASE~~
Hahaha
+ Excellent comment 10/10
I like the trailer and the feeling. Also you push the people to follow your events from the start of the twitter.. =) good work
Thank youuu!!
Love it. I saw the description of encountering fascinating characters and was missing the part in the trailer where it actually showed that. Then in the end it did, yes :)
Thank you very much!!!
love the trailer! Wish some of the wit from it was in the pitch too 🙂
I totally didn’t think of doing that. I just copied the the Pitchyagame winning tweet hahaha!
Really like your new trailer
Thank youuuu!!