Love the trailer! So much information can be found on your press kit page, I was surprised you didn't include one or two more hooks in the tweet itself. Thank you for sharing!
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BROK the InvestiGator's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Unique Selling Point | #2 | 3.929 | 4.077 |
Clarity | #5 | 3.780 | 3.923 |
Engagement | #9 | 3.558 | 3.692 |
Overall Pitch Quality | #9 | 3.706 | 3.846 |
Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- A stand out entry! Great pitch tweet and trailer. Love the visuals, very striking! Suggestions: -- Add Call to Action with the Steam link ie "Wishlist Brok on Steam and Download the Free Prologue" -- Streamline your press kit. It's overly complicated and the header images look like buttons making it confusing. -- Streamline your Call to Actions: Focus on the Prologue page on Steam if that is your number one priority right now.
- It doesn't *roll* any punches and just goes for the jugular! I mean, I'm in awe of the new twist on P&C. I think it's witty and the croc is cool too, always had a thing for them! I would only complain about it being too brief, it didn't seem like anything much was shown to write home about~
- You’re an alligator. You’re in a world full of cool characters. You’re punching stuff. What’s not to love?
- USP very clear. A clearer call to action would be great. Press kit could use some simplifying - it's a bit too colourful.
- Really like this game idea Unique concept Solid press kit You need more hashtags for your tweet I just want to see more game play videos because this looks fun
- Unique characters and great trailer that shows well how all the different mechanics are integrated.
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/BrokGator/status/1452682428053696522?s=20
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://www.brokgame.com/presskit.php
Itch.io Game URL (DevLog Update)
https://cowcat.itch.io/brok
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