Play Jam Project Album
Garkhtz's RMCC Project Album's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Mixing | #3 | 3.636 | 3.636 |
| Overall | #7 | 3.682 | 3.682 |
| Composition | #8 | 3.636 | 3.636 |
| Creativity | #8 | 3.545 | 3.545 |
| Challenge | #10 | 3.909 | 3.909 |
Ranked from 11 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Title
Returning Distastefully (Redline's MCC #5)
Description
A single piano piece that goes from mellow & playable to Fast paced & mechanic.
Another example of how I try to exit my comfort zone & bad habits in creating but keep getting sucked into it.
Plugins used
Grand Rhapsody Piano plugin by Waves
Link(s) to your submission
https://soundcloud.com/billyisdead/returning-distastefully-redlines-mcc-5?si=2a66b36645b14d6e9d6306f8fb7a0949&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
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Comments
Really cool stuff! It's amazing how the two parts are so different, yet somehow fit together. For the opening section, you could maybe experiment with more 7ths and 9ths in your left hand chords to give them a bit more expressiveness and 'crunchiness', while also enhancing the contrast with the relatively clean texture in the second part. I also agree that a third section combining aspects of the first and second sections would be really cool. Awesome job, this was a lot of fun to listen to!
It looks like we had a similar idea :D I really like the first part, it got me interested immediately. I wish there was a third part that brought everything together to combine the human and mechanic part, some sort of resolution. It's also interesting how you made it represent your own way of doing things
It's interesting you brought the third part up,
I myself felt like this track wasn't completer and I'm missing something in it - Interesting idea!
Thanks for the kind words! :)
The mechanical part was well portrayed. The velocity of the notes and the tones sounded like a computer churning away. I am asking myself why the transition, and the transition was executed well.
The two sections contrast in a really interesting way, it kept my attention until the end.
I actually really liked how I could hear the keys being pressed as it went from slow and quiet to fast and loud.