This was very interesting. I'm not the target audience, but I can see how it would be rough to make this shift. It read as quite heartfelt.
The dialogue presented is relevant to the point you're discussing, and very succinct. This is actually something some writers struggle with - linking the assertion well to the actual argument - so good job pulling it off.
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It's easy to see how important this guide would be for people who would need it (though it seems irrelevant to my own background).
It is a bit a shame that the colour scheme chosen can make it a bit hard to read. It was also a bit difficult to find the link for the next page since the colour of the text and of the link is really close to one another. I think if it had a bit more contrast, it would be nicer.
Still, thanks for putting out something that could help people.
I'd recommend a fixed font-size like 20px or so.
250% just made the whole text very hard to read.
Other than that, I thought the text was well written, I've never really been into any religion but I can see how the guide could help those that were.
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