This is so funny and engaging, you clearly have a passion for Epic 7's IP and they should be paying you for this amazing representation of their characters.

Speaking as someone with limited experience with almost everything remotely involved here, from genre to source material, I strongly appreciate both how incredibly absurd this story is so far and how much you've made it almost overwhelmingly clear that you realize it's absurd. This game knows precisely what it is, and from what I've seen so far, it benefits from that. I also feel like I actually really need to think about what I say, which is good for a game like this! 

You've got a strong basis here so far! Keep it up!

As a fellow VN Dev, this is excellent work. I loved the metaplot / fourth wall breaking (always a favorite). I can't wait to play the rest of this!

Love love love this! I have never played Epic 7 or know who these characters are, yet I still really enjoyed this! The dialogue is funny, and the protagonist is witty enough, yet easily able to self insert into. Looking forward to more!

This was pretty entertaining! The sound effects and music are timed pretty well, too. I absolutely love the characterization of the player during the dream sequence!

I'm only partway through, but I've already collapsed into hysterical laughter several times. Also the narrative structure is actually really solid, you've got a strong grasp on the mechanics, plot beats and tropes you're working with. Interestingly, the protagonist reads as female to me regardless of the gender you choose. That's not even necessarily a flaw, it really brings certain aspects of gender politics to the surface.