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Hey small_grey_owl

Those are lovely comments. thanks so much for taking the time to give me such great feedback. It's all much appreciated and I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. 

You're probably right about the theme. I tried to make it subtle and have multiple elements,  ending with  the triumph of a 'strong intelligence' but it was probably a bit too intangible. I just wanted to get away from the standard trope of wizard vs fighter etc. 

Good luck :)

You have put together some great themes and really pulled together a strong character-driven piece. And maybe I'm being too narrow in my own understanding of the theme - I like to play with ideas too. I can definitely see where you've got a more thoughtful, introspective character running into the "strength" of thoughtless adherence to tradition / myopic self-centeredness of an entrenched elite class.