Really enjoyed this!
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this is my game, i’d be really happy if you are able to give it a look!
https://itch.io/jam/finally-finish-something-2021/rate/866307
The environment objects go well together aesthetically, except the enemies and maybe the roast chicken (who is roasting these chicken and placing them on the ground???). instead of wood falling from the sky, have it spawn when the player can’t see it appear (using a distance radius). this is a cool start! it’d be interesting to see how you plan to diverge from Rust, which seems like a clear influence.
SO FUN!!!!! The music is extremely energizing. The dialogue is hilarious and all the small touches & final details you all made to flesh out this world really bring it together. I couldn’t find the cake, I ended up killing my kids in the construction zone to go to a ahem club… a map would be really useful! Also, if the camera were more zoomed out/further from me, that could help in orienting me. Other than those points, my friend and I had a really fun time playing your game.
The game seems to function as intended! Like kisielo says, congrats on your first game. I think to make the AI player more realistic, it could only follow the ball’s horizontal position while the ball is on its side; otherwise, maybe have it move randomly just a bit? Also, if the starting ball is shot at a more horizontal angle, that could make the back-and-forth more dynamic since right now it bounces against the walls like 5 times before reaching a player.
really cool idea! i think the customers could come at a slower rate, and maybe the tape rewinding could take longer? i found myself grabbing a tape, ducking, rewinding it, ducking, putting it back, ducking, and so on, which became more repetitive than responsive to the customers. the lighting and mood in the game are quite nice, i really felt “inside” the game environment. really good work!
eggcelent start for a game! i love the motions of moving as an egg: the waddle back and forth, opening the doors by rolling through, etc. the dialogue sounds are funny. i think my main advice would be to look into ways to optimize speed? despite the game seeming quite simple, it ran a bit slow on my computer, so I bet there are ways to drastically reduce lag through Unity build settings.
Best soundtrack ever! It’s kind of addicting and the penguins are fantastically cute. The difficulty progresses really well. It was funny how the yellow penguin that chases you trips on the ledge… LOL. One idea is to have some colored lights appear on the rink, or some other visual effect, to make it less plain? Also if the soundtrack could have some backup instruments to the penguin quacks, like bells, that could bring the mood even closer to a holiday feeling. Overall my friend and I really enjoyed your game!
It’s an interesting character you’ve made! Some of the things he says are really, really disturbing though, so I hope there’s some sort of confrontation or resolution to that for him/the player, later in the game. Like I’m not sure if I was supposed to dislike him as much as I did. The visuals are an interesting blend of styles, and the pacing of the text is really nice.
THIS IS A REALLY GREAT GAME!!! What a cool idea. I like how you let the player discover what’s going on during the first sequence, but nothing ever feels too difficult or puzzling. I was confused about the meaning of the very end though. I tried to bring the friend to the squares so we could both talk to them but that didn’t work so I… well… let’s just say I was really uncertain if I was supposed to do that :P
There’s a lot of nice touches, like the pseudo-3D-ness of the camera, and the camera movement when shooting. Overall I really really enjoyed playing it.
Wow, thanks for the review Skydjinn! I appreciate your time & feedback. I’m glad you enjoyed the game. In my mind each ghost is distinct and leaves after passing through the lake: I only recycled the eight animations and songs for simplicity. I did use a few Asset Packs from the Unity Store; a critical one was these beautiful palm trees: https://assetstore.unity.com/packages/3d/vegetation/trees/yughues-free-palm-trees-13540 Also, the Easter egg toward the end of your video really spooked me out… !
Hey everyone! I just released my first game, which I’ve worked on for about over a year now. It’s an atmospheric walking simulator. Right now it’s only available for Windows (hopefully Mac is coming soon). I’d love to get some feedback if you have any :)
Here’s the link: https://damondpham.itch.io/return-tape