I love this emotional music! I can imagine if you want to revisit this later in a game as an altered reprise, having a different more orchestrated version would be really amazing.
Really relaxing! As another has said, I think adding more texture layers would be beneficial throughout the track, maybe some ambient synths or something.
Congrats on your first project! I love the track 'Home', but feel like it has a lot of potential with much more variation. Maybe with some atmospheric synths accumulating throughout the track. The melody is really exquisite, it'd be nice if it came in earlier :D.
I have to say, I've never heard an OST like this before! Very unique (in a good way). Some of the more peaceful tracks gave me Ghibli vibes, could be in a TV show of some sort.
I like the variation! This caught me off guard haha, as I read the story as I'm listening. I can definitely visualise what you describe. I can hear this in a Quake-style game.