Hi! Yes, the original only had a female protagonist as well.
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Congrats on your first game! I really like the art, but I to be honest, I really had a hard time reading the text. (Also, found a typo, I think you meant robbed rather than robed.)
Echoing another comment, it would be cool if there's a load bar at the beginning just to get a sense of how long I'll have to wait for it to finish and run.
I enjoyed it! I made two run throughs, and on my second one, when you press 'Don't Bother', is it supposed to end there?
One suggestion though is if you could make the previous choices disappear once they're done, I think it would be better, unless they have some variations in the text.
Still fun though!
That was cool! Salute to coding that in 3-days. You got a lot done it seems, though I'm not exactly sure where it ends. I explored around but wasn't sure where the end is.
And I appreciate the use of OpenDyslexic! (I'm assuming, it looks like it.)
One comment though is the choices seem to be a lot smaller than the narrative text itself? No problem, I can still see it, but it would be nicer if they were of the same size at least.
I enjoyed it! That was a bit intense and i got immersed. Echoing the suggestion about an acknowledgement of the ending though, as I wasn't sure if it was a bug that there weren't any further options, or if it was truly the end. (It did feel complete though, so I'm thinking that's complete.) Thanks for making this! Deffo one of my fave entries.
Here is the code for my entry 'gospel says (i lied)': https://hastebin.com/maloqoqabi.coffeescript
I used Calico, so I'm not entirely sure the markdown would work in the default web player. Nothing fancy.
Looking forward to learning from the other participants. :)