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Gabriella's Sacrifice's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #20 | 3.643 | 3.643 |
| Overall | #28 | 3.512 | 3.512 |
| Adherence to Theme | #30 | 3.393 | 3.393 |
| Concepts & Originality | #46 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Ranked from 28 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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"God wills it" is an underrated plot device that I need to see more of in this universe!!! What a fun and exciting little adventure with a unexpected twist!
I loved the characters and the events that unfolded, and your writing was great!
I really enjoyed the flow and tone of this story especially in the beginning. the characters seem interesting and I enjoy how you used existing lore to characterize them saving words rather than spelling out everything about them.
I love the ratman! Wish we could get more stories about them. Too bad about Gabriella tho. :/
I like the Ratmen too! Hopefully we see the OPR line soon and that will excite more people to write stories of them!
the tyranny of circumstances, nice story
I really liked the set-up of the God-Queen's vision and the unexpected payoff.
Thank you! I am glad it payed off. It has been many years since I wrote anything so this was quite the experience.
This one is super sad, I loved it.
Thanks :) It's hard to make a happy story with the theme of "consequences" but I suppose it works well for the Grimdark namesake.
I like this tale as it had a unit of women who weren't all okay with the mission and their ratman company, both the compassion and the indifference helped this feel more real.
I really appreciate that. I actually found it quite hard to write a group of characters in only 1000 words, so I am glad that the time I spent stressing about it paid off.