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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall | #1 | 4.103 | 4.103 |
| Flow & Clarity | #2 | 4.154 | 4.154 |
| Concepts & Originality | #2 | 4.269 | 4.269 |
| Adherence to Theme | #8 | 3.885 | 3.885 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This guy Universitys.
Absolutely compelling. Brilliant stuff!
Great little one shot scene, I want more now!
I feel bad for this man
Ugh. How sad! Would love to hear more about Guiseppi's adventures, and how he was able to put together his research. Good job!
A good story with a fantastic ending! You leave the reader with just enough information to understand without rubbing their face in it.
I really love how you captured the feel of the duchies of vinci while also making them distinct. You used a very interesting and out of the box concept.
This story honestly crushed it!
Really loved the blend of academia and betrayal in your story! The tension was palpable right until the end. Great use of the theme.
Nice ending twist about turn about being fair play if I am reading that right.
I see we both submitted a story about backstabbing in Vincian acadaemia. I hope this doesn't end with us taking credit for each other's work and sending assassini after each other.
Yeah! Of course not! I would never.... (cancel the hit - cancel the hit!!!)
I loved your more action forward approach, by the way. I hadn't even considered showing the actual subterfuge, but you absolutely nailed it.
I like this Vinci tale, it has great world building, a sympathetic character, and consequences that aren't directly about war. It left a few questions in the reader's mind at the very end, like' why did he do that?'