I'd say the one that stood out was the dream sequence, as well as the scene in chapt. 4 where Edith appears behind Arthur- even though in that one we eventually do get to see her, I found it a bit of a missed opportunity that I was given a description of her appearance first, and then see her a beat later. I'd also have loved to see a little snippet of the two in the Carpe Diem ending. Just my two cents.
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Somebody using the quirks of early photography to pose as a medium is absolutely genius. Great premise with a tightly knit, well written story, not to mention stellar artwork and framing.
If I had one complaint it would be that some of the moments told through text I wished I was shown with visuals instead, but I'm sure that was a limitation from time. Overall, fantastic work!