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A Brothers Trust's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #30 | 3.575 | 3.750 |
| Overall | #38 | 3.274 | 3.433 |
| Concepts & Originality | #39 | 3.385 | 3.550 |
| Flow & Clarity | #44 | 2.860 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Very, very good. I enjoyed the themes you chose and the characters. The description of how the hole in the roof came to be, had me laughing out loud. :D
The only thing I would have liked to know is why the orc blasted into the room in the first place (his original purpose before encountering the fight). :)
After the first draft, I had to either cut parts of the actual story or the prologue that explained the context. I decided that i'd rather keep a more fleshed out fight but yeah, the orcs arrival is now a little to sudden for my taste, too.
Yeah the 1000 word limit is limiting sometimes.
But your story nevertheless is amazing and I had a ton of fun reading it. :)
Wow, that's 3 tales I've read so far where an Orc has good intentions but his would be ally does not. I like that Orc. I want to be as upbeat as him. What a legend.
This story is the first out of the one I have read so far (about half at this point) to bring up the viewpoint that unlikely allies may be temporary, the Brother is true to his training so that ending makes more sense.
Nice little callback to die-hard there, fun story.