Thanks for taking the time to review and comment. The time crunch got me in the end, so I left out some lore, but your feedback is helpful. I have noticed a lot of layout approaches during the jam that I think would really help with readability.
I am blown away by the setting of the lithoplex. I want more adventures in it! Love the idea of going against a rival party. Also the art work... AMAZING!
Huzza great hook and options. I think my party would spend an hour debating which faction to work with lol. Kudos to some of your layout approaches (use of bold words, followed by description) and including coin totals for various pieces of treasure (something I overlooked in my game).
Thanks for the shout out about the vocab. I was playing around with ideas on what to a call a game played simultaneously and interacts with one another, "Tandem Quest" felt the best to me. I had an instance where I DM'd a 12 person game, and I said "Never again." Next time around I convinced one of the players to DM in tandem, and we made up interactions as we went. I wish I had more time to provide the Opposing Dungeon (which is in the works and being created by my partner DM).
I was making this for a personal gaming party, and a friend mentioned the Knave 2e contest, so I rushed to get my art and formatting together. We had too many players so we invented this idea for a Tandem Quest, where we have two tables play in an interactive dungeon. Hopefully I can get the other two chapters by November.
