I like your track! Instrumentation is great and I love the dorian feel of the track. One critique I think would make this track better is adding a counter melody so the music doesnt become too repetitive. Other than that, good job!!
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I liked your submission and enjoyed listing to it. I think the ideas are there and you have the foundations built for the music. One critique I would offer is to vary the melody. 'Our World', for example, has a good melody that runs all the way through. And while it's good, it can begin to get a little stale. Changing up the melody or making a new one adds variety and keeps the listener engaged. Good submission!
Absolutely amazing story!! This has one of my favorite soundtracks I've heard(even competing against professional composers). The music sounds ethereal and dreamy to match the story. I would've love to hear more of 'Upon Entering the Abyss' aand 'Awake'. The music was beautiful, everything flowed together really nicely. Amazing job!!
I was super impressed with this soundtrack!! The fusion of classical and electronic was very creative and worked very well. The first two tracks were strong and blew me away. The third track was nice but didnt leave an impression on me the same way the first two did. Pathway is the perfect title screen track grabbing my attention and leaving me impressed. I would like to know more about the story though. Since the theme is 'inside my world' I would love to know more about what is in Oi's worlds that he can open.
I love the lofi elements of this soundtrack. I think you have a great idea going for you. I think the bass was a smidge overpowering, those synthy basses can get a little loud on certain notes. Overall, for 7-8 months work of experience, you did a fantastic job! I hope to hear more in the future as you grow and learn!
This is a great little soundtrack! Each track does a great job of protraying what you want it to. I feel like they don't have a definitive path between them unfortunately, assembling a light story to tie the ideas of your songs could go a long way. I would love to see what you think this storytelling game tells. The instumentation of these tracks is beautiful. I love your first track a lot. Good work!!
I like this soundtrack! The short designs of the track remind me of undertale. Instrumentation is great and lovely to listen to. I did have a question as to what your thought process was in terms of how it relates to the theme. Your motifs are really strong and these are absolutely beautiful to listen to. Good job!
Thank you for trying out our game! I do agree the parkour is a little difficult but our idea was to make it feel more rewarding. Interesting that you got stuck on the ladder, that's something new. We'll see if there's a possible fix for that. Thanks for taking time to play and leave a comment though!!
I thought this was a very nice simple game. Unfortunately I didn't really understand how it was an adventure game, it felt more like a top down shooter.That being said, I liked the mechanics and how the gun felt. The characters weren't too clear as to their purpose which felt a little weird personally. Overall great work on this nice little game.
I really like this game! The music and sfx are really great. It's a very simple game but also a very challenging one. The difficulty feels like it ramps up very fast and becomes very chaotic but I like it. I don't see a very strong connection to the Adventure theme though. Overall, very nice little game.
I found some troubles playing in broswer so I downloaded the game. Overall, I like the concept of the game and now it was crafted. Guns feel nice and the enemies are definitely a challenge. I did have some struggles understanding the swing of things at first. I picked up the map and was very confused about what each zone meant. The map seemed just a little too big, and it felt more like a chore once gun ammo ran out and I had to take a long walk back to base. Game progression was great and very remeniscent of what I personally like from certain survival games(the search, explore, collect to craft new stuff to explore further) it felt like there were definitely levels to the game. The flip side is that it felt a little slow. I was more worried about ammo and coming back to restock wich made it take even longer. Overall, a very nice little game! Lots of fun with a nice story. Well done!