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OPR Writing Jam #10 - Lab Rats's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #2 | 4.300 | 4.300 |
| Overall | #11 | 3.833 | 3.833 |
| Flow & Clarity | #19 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
| Concepts & Originality | #43 | 3.533 | 3.533 |
Ranked from 30 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Amazing story, was hooked through the whole thing! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Thank you very much! I'm currently in the middle of writing a short series on a self-made universe, so in case you want to read the first few chapters, you can find those on my pixiv:
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/series/11737697
I posted only 3 chapters there, but the 4th and the 5th ones are almost done, so I'll probably post them in a week or two.
A very strong submission, and one of the highlights of the jam for me! I think you did a great job integrating the theme into the whole story, and the ending was very punchy without feeling rushed or unearned.
Thank you! Originally it was a bit longer, but I saw that there was a limit of 1000 words and had to trim it. Glad that it didn't feel rushed because of the trimming.
love a good origin story!
Did my best, hahaha