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OFFICIAL FEEDBACK: Post your links here for all and myself to play Sticky

A topic by angrysmile created Aug 14, 2020 Views: 1,154 Replies: 47
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Please post your completed game links here to promote. Please follow the rules and voting criteria on https://itch.io/jam/beginners-circle-jam-2

PLEASE DO NOT post more than once or re-post after I and others have commented and played through your game :) Be fair to all the other participants

Submitted

shouldn't you wait until the game jam submissions are over, so people can't copy other's games?

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Quite unlikely to happen

Submitted

Can you best all 8 levels and escape? If so how long did it take you?

https://squirtman.itch.io/escape-from-rock-candy-cavern

Submitted

cool game, it's a little laggy on my device though

Submitted

Thank you! and yeah its a little bit laggy on mine as well,  the downloadable version runs much nicer for me!

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it runs pretty good on my windows though, I have a chromebook and a windows pc. It runs so much better on windows. (It might be because my chromebook is a pretty old model)

Submitted

thanks for fixing the lag on the web version

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795 seconds.

Aesthetics is good.

Gameplay was stressful for me, when I first time tried the game, I gave up. "Can you best all 8 levels?" No! I couldn't complete even 3 levels. Maybe because it was more laggy then?  I see other comment saying that you've improved the web performance. However now I'm deadly tired and calm as a corpse, so I managed to get almost to the end of the game before I started to feel the dark side. But I guess such experience is expected from this kind of games. At least this one is not 'Getting Over It".

Submitted

Thanks for coming back! I intended to be a challenge with a bit of a learning curve to figure out the levels, anyway thanks for playing!

Submitted

My Game is finished, can you escape the humans trying to eat you? Can you warn your fellow candy friends about the human and escape to safety?

Find out in the game: Life of a Gummy!

sabertooth-studios.itch.io/life-of-a-gummy

Submitted

I liked the plot.

Candy faces are fun.

Unskippable dialogs are annoying  when I fail a level and have to restart, however for a short game I guess it's ok.

Green text which appears all over the level while you move has too little contrast and thus it's hard to read it, especially while playing on web where movement is jittery.

Submitted

thanks for the feedback, there will be skipable dialogs and smoother camera movement in the next update. I will also make the green text (which is your character speaking to you) move with the screen so you can read it better. Thanks for your suggestions! ;)

Submitted

Life of a Gummy Mobile is here!

Download it on the Google Play store for Android/Samsung/Chromebook: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.sabertoothstudios.lifeofagummy

Submitted

Here is my very first "game" ever attempting to make xD I also learned how much WebGL compresses....everything, compared to Windows build

https://leiafkpuz.itch.io/trick-or-treat-beginners-game-jam2-submission

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The idea is good. I liked the variety provided by the fact that each house hosts its own mini-game.

The controls are not immediately obvious, but guessable, although not very responsive, probably because it's web.

For the level with 'shooting bats at apples' I really had to read the description below the game to understand what's going on. 

Btw, you can attach win build to your game page if you feel that it's much better. And maybe unity export to web can also be improved, at least I can't remember such bad experiences when I did such export.

Submitted

You did a really good job with your game! I really liked the momentum and the weight of the character you made on the map screen and in the orange house, it was a lot of fun.

Submitted

https://no-login-found.itch.io/hyperglicemic

Not sure it makes sense to post it here since the jam is ending soon, so  all the submissions for the jam will be listed.

I'd appreciate some feedback nevertheless, maybe for some some last moment fixes if something critical is discovered

Obviously it would be much more interactive if I had posted the link on discord, however the discord server is configured to beg for my phone number, and I don't feel comfortable enough to give such sensitive information.

Submitted

https://jadegenius.itch.io/jelly-jump

here is my game.

 hope you enjoy it. and beats some real good scores..

feedback is largely appreciated.

Submitted

Pretty fun game! The sounds effects and jumping feel really satisfying. Expert mode is challenging, the game really messes with your depth perception. Nice job!

Submitted

thanks a lot for your feedback.

Submitted

 Not really my type of game, so I can't say much. Played till score 42 and didn't see anything except green cubes. I saw that there are pink cubes in expert mode. So... does beginner mode only has green cubes... forever? If no, adding some kind of 'promise of content' would be great, because just increasing score is not enough to keep my motivation.

Probably making the ball drop a shadow onto the cubes would help with height/depth perception, now it's really hard to understand where the ball is relative to the cubes. Maybe also adding 2 next cubes instead of 1 for beginner mode would also help the beginner. 

I guess aesthetics can be improved easliy by adding some kind of skybox.

The music was too much for me, but luckily we can easily disable sound in browser tabs, so I guess it's not really an issue.

Submitted

really thanks for the detailed feedback. I just made most of the game in a short time and i don't know much about the 3d. I tried using blender but failed. It lagged too much.

I would really do the improvements for a post jam.

I actually have idea for a moving cube and a floating jellies environment, a character and candies to collect and get skins. It became too much scope for me and had to cut in min.

As a dev of the game itself i could not reach 42 thanks for playing it. :))

Submitted

Hey all,

I made a tiny metroidvania for the game jam. Your goal is to collect enchanted candy and gain new powers to move around the map. Feedback is welcome and appreciated!

https://gamedevlibrarian.itch.io/candyvania

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I really like your sprite work,  it was very well done and gave your game a very unique style. The one thing I was having issues with was your platforms were a bit slippery, which made precise movement difficult sometimes.  Overall a very good game and a lot of fun!

Submitted

Thanks so much!

Submitted

https://jollyshmo.itch.io/tooth-break-demo

Have fun playing this Break Out style game, I learned a lot making this. I hope you enjoy playing it. Always have fun!

Submitted

Hello everyone,

I made a small point-and-click adventure about escaping a witch's candy house. I had a lot of fun making it, and I hope you all enjoy it!

https://tgmage.itch.io/witch-way-out

Any and all feedback is appreciated.

Submitted

Here is the final version of my entry https://chris32156.itch.io/candy-junkie Its A Arcade game where you eat candy to evade zombies. Any Feedback would be appreciated.

Submitted

Escape the boiling sugar and try not to get candied! Can you reach 1000?

https://sofiregu.itch.io/candied

Submitted

Good morning, afternoon or night here is the game https://forasterxd.itch.io/candywitch. It is supposed to be an horror-action game,  but I dont like so much the result. Any feedback  is apreciated and thanks for playing the game.

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https://the-last-samurai.itch.io/candyeye

Any feedback is appreciated!

Try to collect all the candy to escape.

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I really like the style, I think the resolution is a little big in the web browser. I did the same thing =) I really like the music reminds me of invader zim.

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this is my first game, sorry if its buggy https://redsodacan.itch.io/tooth-protector its a beat em up game, feedback is appreciated, and Thank you for playing my game

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yeah sorry, you can download it now

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This is my game. Its name is candyland.You have to cross the lava river through the candy bridge to reach the hospital. Its an adventure game.

Link for the game :https://asstudios.itch.io/candyland .Thankyou  for playing , feedback is appreciated. 

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Hi everyone! Here is my Gummy Bear beat'em all game: https://alariann.itch.io/candy-jam

Try to survive and go to the highest difficulty level that you can  and get the highest combo. Maybe I'll implement the Gumball Machine God boss fight later if requested!

Could be a little slow on the browser, if that's the case there are other versions for desktop platforms available.

Have fun!

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Here is my game: https://collisiond.itch.io/sugar-roots(Broken)

This link should work: https://collisiond.itch.io/sugar-roots-test

Have fun and please say how many times you died as a reply, also feedback is welcomed and encouraged

Submitted

The link shows 404, and when I click on your name, it doesn't show 'creator of...' game link, and there's no [submitted] badge near your nick name, so... is your game [public]? Is it even there?

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Fix it, try again, thanks for telling me

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Now I see the page, but your web version isn't working, showing black screen. 

And windows file is also not working since you need to deploy it with pck, not just exe.

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This link should work: https://collisiond.itch.io/sugar-roots-test


Also thanks for telling me about these issues.

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Hello! Here is our game Need For Sweet  : https://johnng.itch.io/need-for-sweet

Roll around in all the candy you could ever want! @_@

Play in browser or download on windows

Enjoy!

Submitted

Play as a hardcore and intense Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson peppermint while kicking evil gummy bear butt. 

https://t-code.itch.io/candy-mayhem-rise-of-the-gummy-empire

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https://infinitybeltgames.itch.io/duck-hunting


Here ya go

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https://jakegosche.itch.io/gumdrop-party It's a side-scrolling exploration/simulation game. Hope you have fun! My first game so if you run into any bugs I apologize.

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I am a very begginner to game development and this my second game so far. Please see this and give your feedback. Every feedback is appreciated 😊

https://itch.io/jam/beginners-circle-jam-2/rate/752491#post-1988013

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Here is my game: https://todemann.itch.io/take-your-kids-to-work-day


Feedback is welcome and I hope you enjoy it. :)