Really nice aesthetic. The music makes a tense and uneasy feeling which is cool for the game's aesthetic, though I think it was a bit too irritating as it looped over and over. I feel like the movement was also a bit janky and felt like it was choppy at times. But otherwise, the platforming aspect was really good  and I liked the dialogue. The aesthetic is definitely my favorite part of this game though, it's really unique. Please give my game a try too :)

Hey, loved your game,  loved your art , music , game design ,a bit of polish and your game will be pretty cool! I enjoyed playing it. 
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Found that the jumping could be tuned a bit but besides that, it was really fun.

Hey, your concept is nice,  and i really enjoyed the parallax effect that you used with the background =).  The controls are hard to use, and jumping is very imprecise, i think you should improve that. One more thing is that the background music is very annoying for my taste, but that's personal.  

The story and atmosphere was intriguing!

Unfortunately, there was something wrong with movement. There was some weird friction that made the left/right movement twitchy. Jumping was very unreliable, too. There wasn't any consistency on the jump height, sometimes it would jump higher with movement, sometimes it made no difference. Not sure if there was meant to be a wall jump mechanic, but the level design implied such, so I guess it just didn't work.

I don't know if these problems are universal since other comments don't say much about them.

I would have enjoyed the game a lot if the gameplay worked. I love looking for secrets, collectibles and story elements, and the mood was good. I did finish with a bad ending, collected 16 cosmic holes.

The control is okay but it's kinda weird when I jump after running.

It's just my personal feelings, I felt not so smooth at all.

Another thing is that the sound effects are a little bit too loud.

As for the rest, I like the effect of holes and how the character slides.

I also like those secret passages you set.

The dark, black and white atmosphere is really good.  I think the music was good, but you 100% need a volume control!  I also like the lighting effect you have on the main menu.

Good game! Great graphics!

nice game well done bro great work !!

btw i rated ur game can u do the same pls ?? and thx !!

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The graphics and music create a strange but great atmosphere,You should improve a Little bit the jumping and running mechanics.The idea is good.Good Job!!

Nice platformer! The music is a bit scary and fits well with the overall graphics. Good job!

Graphic and atmosphere are really good.  

Cool graphics! However the start audio is really loud and there is no way to tell where to go. Maybe add some lights?

Had a good time playing this. Controls were very solid, well done!

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The puzzle layout was alright. But for me at least, the background made it very difficult to recognize where everything was, okay that probably was intentional. Otherwise graphically, the particle effects were on point but the audio became bit tiresome after a while. I'd see this is a good idea to start with.

The particle effects and the background made the game like it had actually taken down by holes!!! Love this submission! Best luck

Really enjoyed the game! An awesome platformer, I love the music and the art style it goes really well with the theme! Good game overall!

Very cool platformer! I love how you managed to create this entertaining and original game using simple shapes and mechanics, really good job there.

The visuals along with the sound create a charming aura that I sure enjoyed.
As some people have pointed out, I felt a little bit lost the first time when I pressed S and did not enter the warp hole, also some wall jumps are very tricky, but I felt very accomplished when achieving some crazy jumps.

Great game, congratulations :3