The pixelated images were honestly very creepy, and the sound and stuff was also very atmospheric. I actually fell off the world in the first person section (oops) and had to start over. Still, it was a horror game! I liked the little bit of characterization you got in during the opening sequence--that it's a local pizzeria and you're just an average joe. It was neat, too, I thought, that the character actually thought of calling the police afterward. 

Good job!

Good writing, but needs an editing pass, first person segment needed more love. Don't be afraid to work with basic cubes and cylinders with colored materials to express stuff if models aren't working out. 

I walked off the road and fell into the abyss forever.

Creepypasta game. VN portions much better than the short first-person segment, which - to be honest - probably shouldn’t have been included. Writing was mostly fine; could’ve used proofreading.

Forgot to add controls:

WASD to move 

E to Interact / Next 

(Shift to Run)

Small walking simulator, nothing in particular stood out.