Hi again!

Took the chance to continue an old save with the newest version, so this was from after the school graduation

Good:

-Lots of fluffy details, like the big castle library has different stuff for every book section, also every mirror has different reactions, love that kind of stuff!

-Liking where the story is going.

-Nice puzzles!

-Changing party members around helps keep things fresh.

Bad:

-Too little action. Like after the school graduation there's that massive area, and despite looking around there was not a single battle before just moving to the next big area. Also it just doesn't feel right that there's such big open area yet most things either can't be interacted or are dead ends. Sprinkle some enemies and treasures to find around said big areas?

-Some cutscenes feel longer than they need to be. Lots of talking is one thing, but then showing the characters moving around from one place to the other would probably be better served by some fade-in and fade-out.

-Why is the barmaid at the adventurer's guild looking so gloomy?

Great work!

Second play still has not get very far I was trying to speed up too. X_X 

When you are ready to redo the title art I will be here to help with it. As for the beginning of the game, on replay I would have to agree with others try to reduce the info dump on the players at the beginning, like the maniac mode explanation can be called out if the player decide to select it, then hit confirm after message display, rather than before; more info before starting the story the more disengaging it can be. But if info dump is not avoidable as your game is quite deep in the system design, you can spice it up with some personality, like using your Fairy persona to narrative it all to make it fun. The Indiegame advantage is that we don't need to take our projects too seriously, just like how you designed the skills for your characters, explanation can be done with some humor as well. 

I will take another look afterwards and hope to get further in the story. Thanks for your support on my stream as well. 

DUNGEON MASTER!

The hardest part is all Tutorial/Intro stuff before the action starts. 

Was still need to use a keyboard to call a Menu. Binding it to [Start] gamepad key alongside of [Y] would be great.

I liked the setting of the game and the combat system seemed to go deep. I found the characters passives to be really funny and a nice touch of extra personality. One suggestion I would make is I notice the quality of the character art in your thumbnail is not as well rendered as the growing up sequence art of Angel in game. I think this is a really missed opportunity, as you should try to put your very best visuals up front to attract people to click on your game page. 

For a game which at first glance feels like basic RPG Maker stuff, you sure surprised me. Quite a good game you have go here. Loved the title screen. It can get a bit too much with info at times.
My main piece of advice would be to try and give ample space between "how to play" tips and not throw it all at once at the player. Hope that makes sense lol. English isnt my first language.

Hey there! I just got done testing this title!

My feedback is somewhat negative, but I do really like the presentation and vibes of the game, and I find the combat promising. If you'd like to see my full playthrough notes,I've made a Google Doc for you!

Overall, my biggest recommendation would be to trim the fat. This game has a very nice presentation, and generally the vibes are great. I get what it’s going for, but this intro is going to lose players extremely quickly if it doesn’t introduce a good reason to keep their engagement. It already opens with a deluge of settings for the player, most of which should just be put in an options menu for the player to use on their own time. The prologue chapter had a lot of downtime in Lady Helen outwitting the guards and doing a bunch of attacks on them, guards walking around looking for her, and generally none of it was really necessary to the actual important parts of the game (the gameplay and story). After the prologue, the game starts with you needing to roam around your house picking up various items, and after that you have to explore an enormous school and do another lengthy tutorial fight, all without really being given a reason to care about the plot, characters, or gameplay. Even for a slower burn game, players should be given a reason to care so they can get through the slower parts with anticipation for bigger moments, rather than just waiting for the game to start.

Overall Fun: 2 / 5 - I think it’s likely got potential in the mechanics department. The ability to switch weapons and interrupt enemies sounds extremely engaging. Unfortunately, the extremely slow intro whittled away at my patience, and after a half hour without any interesting gameplay I finally decided to call it quits.

Art/Graphics: 4 / 5 - Outside the custom artwork which is pretty appealing but so far used very sparingly, the graphics are just ordinary RTP. This is above average presentation for this engine however, with custom backgrounds on the menus, and special tiles created for certain locations. It’s clear a lot of work went into the presentation here, so while I would normally give an RTP heavy game a 3 for being “good enough”, the clear effort that went into how the game looks despite the prefab assets deserves an extra point.

Controls/UI: 3 / 5 - It functions just fine. I don’t really see any particular areas where it’s especially bad, but overall the presentation is very cluttered and could use some cleaning up (e.g. all the settings at the start of the game, or the menus inside menus inside menus all over the pause screen). It’s good enough but could definitely be cleaned up.

Music/Sound: 3 / 5 - It’s mostly ordinary and generic sound. Nothing stuck out to me as especially bad nor good, other than the school theme having a very pleasant atmosphere and getting stuck in my head. It’s perfectly functional but nothing special.