Your mix is clean as hell, and I like your sounds. The bass and the plucked sounding synths are great.  There's a bit around 2:41 ish where the string-sounding synths comes in after the plucked-sounding one, and it's so satisfying. Your piece fits together smoothly.

In a jam where the rule was to be unruly, this track was a little maybe too consistent and uniform but that was the only flaw I saw.  Everything else was above-board and well produced.  

I had a pretty pleasant time listening to the piece.  Nice work

Good job ! 

Very good quality in the mix and sound design, with enough variations and ideas to make it interesting through all the piece 

I especially liked the half time change at 2:56, makes the groove so heavy, was a nice surprise :D

Congrats !

Super clean and really enjoyable track to vibe to. The changes throughout keep it changing and evolving which I like a lot! 

I love your choice of synths, The low end is super clean and satisfying. Very well mixed! 

ambience indicates a cold space to me. especially with that white noise that sounds like moving air in the ambience of the overall mix. i can absolutely see this in a documentary with archeologist hiking up a dormant volcano located at high altitudes where the environment is windy, cold, but still majestic over drone broll. good job

Nice ambience, I had the feeling that it reminded me of something, then I read Japanese Ambience and it was clear. I was into Hiroshi Yoshimura some time ago and this track triggered that memory. The moments of silence are a good addition, and I find interesting the parts in which you switched the low-high octave pattern with the high-low. It's a stronger twist than I would expect. The mix is great