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A jam submission

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A visual novel about helping a girl get home and the challenges that come with the task.
Submitted by Cold Winter Cabin (@ColdWinterCabin) — 5 hours, 57 minutes before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Audio#103.8003.800
Overall#123.7553.755
Graphics#144.0254.025
Originality & Innovation#223.8253.825
Fun & Game Design#473.4753.475
Theme#533.6503.650

Ranked from 40 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

The story is so engaging! and the music selection for the story is epic!! And the dog mini game was a bit difficult for me! but I enjoyed playing the first game!

Developer

Thanks! I waited to add the music until the last day. I listened to songs while testing the game to see which ones fit the best. Also I'm going to make the dog minigame easier in an update.

Submitted(+1)

Good Job with the story and the different mechanics in the game

Submitted(+1)

Awesome work! The story was great with new challenges every now and then. And that chihuahua was so fast lol. Loved the game very much <3

Submitted(+1)

Nice story to tell,

Good music,

 Very well done game ! ;)

Submitted(+1)

Nice work and well done!

Submitted(+1)

Extremely impressive, especially for your first jam! Great story and visuals and the fights are well crafted. Great work!

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Yoo I love this , the music and art style are so immersing <3

this is my first time playing a visual novel made by Gdevelop and I enjoyed it

Submitted(+1)

Cool story for a visual novel...

A cute waifu is like the cherry on top...

I suggest you to add sound effects for the text (or even a voice, if you want) to add more focus to the player...

All the best! <3

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the feedback. I am planning on doing a post jam update to incorporate all the feedback that I have gathered. I will definitely add text sound effects.

Submitted(+1)

Interesting story, I love story based games so much :)

Submitted(+1)

Great game! If the texts played has a sound effect (typing sound or others) it might be better.

Developer

Thanks for the feedback. When voting ends I will add it in an update to the game.

Submitted(+1)

simple and effective concept. well done :)

Submitted(+1)

English is not my native language and I don't understand English, so I'm not interested in playing, but audio and grafics cool

Unfortunately

Submitted(+1)

Great story line

Submitted(+1)

I lost myself in this games deep art

Submitted(+1)

What a great game! I love the art and music, this level of polish is incredible! The blending of genres serves the game very well. Awesome work!

Submitted(+1)

Noooo! I want more!!!!!!!! I love the story and the art, you have a talent in making pixel art. Nice work. By the way the dog is hard to avoid . haha nice game.

Developer(+1)

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the game! I will tweak the difficulty a bit in an update.

Submitted(+1)

Very entertaining story and atmosphere that the game builds. 👍

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Had a bit of a struggle when the combat first started but the art of the whole game is quite impressive! I do like visual novels but I hope you consider a quicker speed option for the text, or a way to click and proceed faster. It would also make it easier if you want to replay or go through it another time. Well done all around!

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the feedback! I will add an option for text speed and a way to skip to the end of text in an update.

Submitted(+1)

This is a gem. Love the variations in style and the story finds a way to wrap up in a satisfying way even though it's pretty short.

Developer (1 edit) (+1)

Thanks! I originally wanted it to be longer. I was planning to have 4 minigames but I didn't have enough time.

Submitted(+1)

interesting story i will return to more :)

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