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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Audio | #10 | 3.800 | 3.800 |
| Overall | #12 | 3.755 | 3.755 |
| Graphics | #14 | 4.025 | 4.025 |
| Originality & Innovation | #22 | 3.825 | 3.825 |
| Fun & Game Design | #47 | 3.475 | 3.475 |
| Theme | #53 | 3.650 | 3.650 |
Ranked from 40 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This is your first submission ever and your twitter has nothing. Tell me your stories and how you got here, cause this is a 10/10
Thanks! I will definitely start posting some stuff on twitter. I was always nervous about what people would think of the stuff I made. This game jam definitely helped me get over that fear.
Wow, this was amazing! It was very coherent and atmospheric, and you’ve totally nailed the theme in every aspect! I could count at least 5 occurrences/reinforcements of it throughout the game. Congratulations, this really has a chance to win!
I think this is the best game of this jam I've played so far! A really good take on the theme, and super polished overall. Like others, I'm really struggling to get past the dogs (though mainly just because I'm a little frustrated having to start right from the beginning including the conversation every single time - checkpoints would help tremendously). The game feels very sluggish overall: the text moves at an absolute crawl, especially considering you can't click to advance. Still, that seems like the kind of thing that could be easily fixed and it's totally forgivable given the time constraints of the jam.
Thank you for the kind words and the feedback. I was actually thinking of adding a checkpoint in the dog mini game so now that you mention it I will definitely add one in the update. Text speed and skip will also be getting a fix.
Nice game
The game is really amazing! I didn't manage to pass the dogs though :)
Thanks! I'm definitely making the dog level easier in an update.
I really liked the game and story; it reminded me of Undertale. My only wish would be that I sometimes wanted to advance the dialogue faster.
Thank you! I will be adding dialogue speed and skip to the end of text in an update.
Good story x Rpg nice!!!
Beautiful story. I can't believe this is your first game. Really enjoyed it. Only issue I noticed was the slider on the (power bar?) in the RPG battle sometimes might have disappeared if I clicked too many times in a row, though I could have been mistaken.
Thanks! I will look into that bug.
This was beautiful... I loved it! The fight scene was a bit slow and the dog scene was hard, but the story was amazing!
I will speed up the fight scene a bit and make the dog minigame easier in an update. Thank you for the feedback!
This is amazing, wonderful, captivating, pulling in, beautiful, and atmospheric.
Just why couldn't you give me ability to accellerate those subtitles... waiting for them takes for ever, just one click to make the text write itself to the end or just speed up to my reading speed, it's not much is it?
Anyway wonderful gem you made.
It's a gem.
I'm going to add text speed options and the ability to skip to the end of text in an update. Thanks for the feedback.
I will happily play the updated version!
very creative , the story is captivating and very intelligent the art is very well placed congratulations
this is such an amazing game especially for ur first game jam. the atmosphere and visuals are EVERYTHINGGG. such a lovely story too <3
The story is so engaging! and the music selection for the story is epic!! And the dog mini game was a bit difficult for me! but I enjoyed playing the first game!
Thanks! I waited to add the music until the last day. I listened to songs while testing the game to see which ones fit the best. Also I'm going to make the dog minigame easier in an update.
Good Job with the story and the different mechanics in the game
Awesome work! The story was great with new challenges every now and then. And that chihuahua was so fast lol. Loved the game very much <3
Nice story to tell,
Good music,
Very well done game ! ;)
Nice work and well done!
Extremely impressive, especially for your first jam! Great story and visuals and the fights are well crafted. Great work!
Yoo I love this , the music and art style are so immersing <3
this is my first time playing a visual novel made by Gdevelop and I enjoyed it
Cool story for a visual novel...
A cute waifu is like the cherry on top...
I suggest you to add sound effects for the text (or even a voice, if you want) to add more focus to the player...
All the best! <3
Thanks for the feedback. I am planning on doing a post jam update to incorporate all the feedback that I have gathered. I will definitely add text sound effects.