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A jam submission

Unwanted GuestView game page

A visual novel drawn BY HAND!
Submitted by Simonian, tehwalkingtrash โ€” 5 hours, 56 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Graphics/Art#14.4004.400
Overall#33.1753.175
Devlog#4n/an/a
Audio#52.9002.900
Gameplay/Fun#102.5002.500
Theme#122.9002.900

Ranked from 10 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Game Engine / Tools
Unity

How does your game fit the theme?
The main character absorbs knowledge in a peculiar way.

Devlog link
https://simonian.itch.io/unwanted-guest

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Comments

Host (1 edit) (+2)

Nice visual story telling game ๐Ÿ˜Š!

GAMEPLAY 
Not much action with the keyboard but a good story that is revealed with visual art. That was something different. The text was maybe a bit too slow on the screen or maybe a key to speed it up till the end. But the story was fun to discover!

GRAPHICS/ART  
Very good unique art style! It also fitted the mood of the story very well.

AUDIO       
Good eerie space horror vibe ambient sound track. Also fitted well with the whole game.

THEME 
Creative idea, check!

Overall a very nice story to explore ๐Ÿ’ช! Keep up this very nice art!

Submitted(+2)

really nice, this stroy was amazing and OMG your art is so gorgeous. Love it so much, really nice entry x3 โ™ฅ

Developer

thank you very very much for playing and for commenting ^_^

Submitted(+2)

Loved the storytelling. The amazing art style and scary sounds fit it very well. My only criticism is that I wish the text moved much faster or that we had an option to skip dialogue as some of it was kind of repetitive. This game was unique in a good way and I enjoyed playing it.

Developer

Your criticism is very much appreciated! ^_^

I 'm glad you enjoyed it! 

Submitted(+2)

The thing inside Eva kills everyone & you say: 

...

Absolutely, fantastic job, my friend! I really, really, really liked  the art - It was amazing! Great story telling. The audio fit the intense story super well. Absorbing the main character worked for the theme. 

As Woomek said "5/5 graphics" & my only critique is that the text could have went faster/had a skip button.

Overall Amazing Job & Keep It Up! - Again the art was fantast, outstanding job!

Developer(+1)

Haha that twisted humor is miss WalkingTrush 's idea :P

I 'm very glad you appreciate it.

Same for the graphics!

Submitted(+2)

New and fun Idea, very good.

Developer

Glad you liked it! ^_^

Submitted(+2)

This was a bit of fun. I almost did something like this using AI generated art. I appreciate the whiteboard style :D

same comment as woomek, have your skip button skip to revealing the whole text, not just skipping the entire paragraph.

Developer

I would really like to see that! 

Miss WalkingTrash is already working on it! The new build will be uploaded after the jam is over ^_^

Submitted(+2)

An interesting, game with an artstyle I wasn't expecting

Cool experience

Developer(+1)

I 'm really glad you found it interesting! Thank you for both praying and commenting! ^_^

Submitted(+3)

5/5 graphics. Very well done. Nice little story-game. 

If i can give you 1 tip is that it is nice if you can skip the loading of the dialogue (with a button). So the whole sentence is in the screen instead of letter by letter. Just a preference. 

Developer(+2)

Thank you so much <3

Due to time limitations we didn't implement the skipping of the dialogue loading, but we definitely plan to add it in the future :)

Submitted(+2)

Sorry you ran out of time to add a skip button. I know what it's like to have to leave out features because of time constraints. Congrats on your first VN. The art style was unique and I had fun with some of the silly responses the parasite could make :)