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Impressions Composing Jam: Special Holiday Jam's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Overall Uniqueness/Creativity | #32 | 2.676 | 2.909 |
Composing Quality | #33 | 2.341 | 2.545 |
Correlation to Project Description | #33 | 2.425 | 2.636 |
Overall | #33 | 2.275 | 2.473 |
Listenability | #34 | 1.756 | 1.909 |
Execution | #34 | 2.174 | 2.364 |
Ranked from 11 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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The composition is good.
Mix is kind of harsh in the trebles, and sounds kind of tinny because its EQ'd kind of high, the violin is shrill and has kind of a midi sound to it.
Good work overall though, it has a nice vibe.
All right first thing, you have to EQ the highs, its way too piercing, its missing alot of mid and low in the mix to balance everything, the composition is fine you probably need to add some textures around it to make it fuller. And add a soundcloud, bandcamp, youtube link instead of downloading the file, its more convenient.
Also my feedback may seem brutal but don't be too offended by it, I went all in sine its unranked jam.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate the constructive opinions :)
It's very nice; I may just think that the sound of the lead the violin is a little too strident and aggressive for a piece that is overall rather relaxing.
I was thinking of something more dramatic rather than relaxing, thanks anyway for listening and evaluating my work
Heartwarming, sweet, and.... fun?
Good job!
It's a bit shrill, but good melody!