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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall | #10 | 3.833 | 3.833 |
| Adherence to Theme | #10 | 3.786 | 3.786 |
| Flow & Clarity | #11 | 3.857 | 3.857 |
| Concepts & Originality | #23 | 3.857 | 3.857 |
Ranked from 28 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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A pleasure to read, excellent work, no notes.
incredibly kind! Thank you!
Help, dear miner, I'm stuck!
it’s true 😂
My wife said, "I would read a book of that." 5 stars
tell your wife she’s my favorite 😂😎
Love the back and forth of the characters in this. It definitely feels like a job-site in that everyone is bickering and quibbling.
I think the theme is clear here, but it also seems like Ferdinand's crew stumbled upon these consequences by accident rather than their actions. Sure, Ferdinand is clearly not a great project manager, but the impact of the consequences would be far grater if he had some idea that this was going to happened, but ignored the warning signs out of desperation or foolishness.
thanks for the feedback! I tried to insinuate that Lillian had told him as much. I really appreciate you’re thoughts on the story!
I loved these dwaves! You prose was well-constructed and it felt natural. While I understand the folks who said the end came suddenly, that's kind of how it goes in stories this short. :D
super kind! Thank you!
This was an enjoyable story. I thought the start was very strong and drew me into the setting, but the ending felt a little rushed
thanks for your feedback! I’m definitely used to longer form!
Nice read. Very understandable with good flow and clarity until the end. Just not clear on the last phrase.
Thank you! It’s supposed to be him stuck in the rocks and his situation. I appreciate you’re feedback!
Under appreciated faction, love to see more world building in the less favourite factions. The build up lasted a little long but it was still a fun reveal!
thanks for reading!
Great energy and a thrilling blend of tech and supernatural elements. The stakes felt real and the theme of consequences was well executed. Nice job capturing the tension and urgency!
means a lot! Thanks!
Very polished and well organized, definitely a highlight of the jam for me!
thanks a lot!
Really good story that fits the theme and creates some believable characters and dialogue along the way. Good job!
thanks! Really appreciate the comment!
Good little story.
thanks!
Grate writing. Dwarf censorship is fraging amazing. XD
Remember, you can never dig to deep.
thanks! A debtor is never satisfied 😎