I may be reading it wrong, but it feels like there rebel guerillas have some (or just insinuated) connection here with havoc change demons.

I think it kind of feels like a slog to read in that it is basically a history textbook. Appreciately abridged in the face of the World Book sure, and a great document for its own purpose but kind of a slog when grading so many other entries.

wow, this was really cool. The form was a really good choice. There aren’t many stories with rebel guerullas and I think this once personified them perfectly. The story was written well enough that It could have been submitted without the last section but the last section was a good addition and helped wrap it up.