Play book
OPR Writing Jam#3-Threshold of Doom's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to the Theme | #4 | 4.211 | 4.211 |
| Enjoyment | #11 | 3.526 | 3.526 |
| Overall | #12 | 3.789 | 3.789 |
| Originality | #13 | 3.632 | 3.632 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Leave a comment
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
Comments
Pretty good how it made the reader guess who Marlan was letting in. Almost expected a late save from the Battle Brothers, but that ending worked a lot better.
interesting concept. The idea of abandonment being a central theme is powerful. Nice work.
Thank you, part of that emerged as a natural consequence from the rapid editing process to fit the one page parameter which I found very interesting and challenging. In reading the other submissions I think the format drives everyone to focus, the horror pieces stand out, the character pieces have been really good, and the humor pieces have been genuinely funny. This has been a fun jam.
The story builds up very effectively to a powerful and terrible final moment. I loved it.
Thank you so much for your kind comments, I am very glad you enjoyed it!
Threshold manages to feel like it was ripped straight out of a Horus Heresy novel, I love the writing style and I think it carries the piece really well.
that’s quite high praise, I am very glad you seemed to enjoy it!