Grim. Dark. As moods go, you got this dead to rights. Not the most charismatic of characters, but I think that was what you were shooting for, if so, well done.
Thanks man! Yeah, got a bit rushed at the end, and I can see where I made some errors. I should have kept everything aligned along the left side throughout the whole piece. It was tricky to write, but fun. I honestly probably won't fix it since this kind of thing only works once, but like I said, it was fun, and surprisingly few people noticed it anyway, or if they did, they're keeping it to themselves.
I loved the Samurai motif, right down to the death haiku. Could use a little more clarity on what is a log and what is inside his own thoughts, but overall, not a bad read.
I dig it. Well done! You managed to make both the same while making them from different and distinct cultures. The locket/necklace was a favorite, but the lizard crawling around in the trees was also great. Again, well done!
