Way to weave some humor into the Grimdark!

Way to weave some humor into the Grimdark!

As a fan of those other Hydra Brothers from GW, I thought I was in for some infiltration goodness. But I got Grin-dark instead.

The melodramatic villain bit was the first cue that something comedic was going on here. Probably now my favorite entry so far. Not gonna lie. Seen this in a comedy skit somewhere... with shapeshifters or something, but here its good enough to count as original in my book, cos its comedy without resorting to greenskins. So pat that writer on the back.

This one made me laugh! Great visuals along with the premise

I love the comedic premise of this. That poor guy being the only one who's actually supposed to be working there.

Agree, damn funny. Was expecting something else and then shifting into a villain monologue checklist, but what I really like is the actual concept of infiltration cells not knowing each other were there and could easily be redone into a more serious longer story.

thoses guys where far too good at their jobs for their own sake

good thing they already surrender their sanity to the lords of havoc

The funniest submission I've read so far!

This was amazingly funny. I don't have anything else to say about it. You set out to write something hilarious and you succeeded. Hat off.

From the start we are right into the action! Really good way to take the story actually. Love the idea of this nearly cartoonish reveal of the Hydra Infiltrator,

and just finished the piece, utterly hilarious, I love this a lot actually. I think it fits a really fun spirit that this fandom needs. Good work!